Reviews for Look no further chapter 9 . 4/1/2012
I hope you come back to this story! It's really good and I'd love to see where you go with it. :)
silver drip chapter 5 . 6/28/2011
Two things I've noticed about your writing as of late is: A simple grammar error 'of' isn't 'off'. You often use of when off would make more sense. Idk how to explain the difference between the two so just look it up in a dictionary. You've done this in many of your stories. The other thing I've noticed is your use of the word 'anyhow'. It's not a common thing to say in the part of the country where I reside so it might just be me who notices that you use it a bit often. Not noticeably so to most, this is just sort of a side note. I only noticed it because I love the English language. Nice story so far btw.
stacey c chapter 9 . 4/19/2011
I just read this story and I think its good. Can't wait for the next chapter if you plan on continuing it.
Kim Ginsberg chapter 9 . 3/18/2011
popila chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
i really love your idea. i alwayt though that their first meeting was wrong... you know... he is a god of war and he just follow her -suuuuuure...
Ness1956 chapter 9 . 1/24/2011
Love your story! Please update soon!
Ness1956 chapter 8 . 1/24/2011
lol great chapter!
Ness1956 chapter 7 . 1/24/2011
I'm hooked!
Ness1956 chapter 5 . 1/24/2011
Thanks you for Peter and Char in your story...I love them to pieces!
Ness1956 chapter 4 . 1/24/2011
I can't wait to see where this is going! Great story.
Ness1956 chapter 3 . 1/24/2011
I love your story!
Lady Ramona chapter 8 . 12/28/2010
Go Jasper..I fucking hate to shop...ans wal-mart hell is just that..I remember the 1st time I went into a big one. I stood just like that...only I didn't growl, I just wanted to get the hell out of there
KareBear1965 chapter 9 . 12/14/2010
awesome chapter and I can't wait until your next update.

KareBear1965 chapter 8 . 12/14/2010
nice chapter

KareBear1965 chapter 7 . 12/14/2010
loved being in Char's mind...

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