|Reviews for The Definition of Want|
| Jigglypuffer chapter 11 . 2/19/2012
OMFG, another Twilight detractor who still writes Twilight fanfiction! :3 I loved, loved, loved this! I love how you make Jacob actually feel REMORSE for his actions in the canon series. I also loved that Bella actually figure out what a horrible person she (and Edward) is AND improves! I'm going to go read everything else you wrote. I hate Twilight, but I think I could love your interpretations of it. :D
| hufflepuffpride21 chapter 10 . 1/29/2012
That was a good ending :) Go Jake and Bells :)
| Scubabe chapter 11 . 1/11/2012
I just had to review and say that I absolutely ADORED every single word of this story! Jacob was written so well, and Leah, and Bella's decisions, and the lemons, wow, certainly got me ready for a cold shower :) I adored this story and am off now to read everything else you've ever posted, thank you so much!
| Mjkenn01 chapter 5 . 12/15/2011
Bahahahaha this isn't angst; this is humor! God I haven't laughed this hard EVER at a fanfiction.
You are better at Meyer-voice than Meyer is. The irony of this goes without saying.
| dancingbarefoot chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
I love your depiction of the characters;I've personally found Edward to be very sinister all ,selfish,with little memory of empathy or humanity.I wondered how he could actually feel love for Bella at all,or anyone else for that matter.I also wondered more than once how Charlie Swan in his position of Police Chief had never done a more thorough background check on any of the the Twilight series is indeed a work of fiction/fantasy,she underestimated some of her your other stories,as well!
| DraconisKam chapter 6 . 12/2/2011
you know, i kind of hate you righ now, I broke dow while reading this chapter
| AngelOfDeath07 chapter 10 . 11/26/2011
So I’m half awake and probably won’t make sense but I had to finish this before I went to bed and I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I liked how you wrote Jacob’s thoughts; he is very funny, especially singing 80’s music.
I am glad that Bella didn’t have his baby at that moment in time it was incredibly… weird and complicated and I’m glad she finally come to her senses and choose Jake over Edward. Granted I was so sad when she left with Edward after spending the weekend with Jake that I felt choked up and when she left to think things through.
I loved Leah and Jake’s friendship, she is a funny girl and it was very sweet. I also like how Jake gave Edward the beer and sat with him lol.
And well Bell and Jake not being able to keep their hands off each other… added bonus :)
A amazing, amazing, amazing fic!
| AngelOfDeath07 chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
I was gonna wait until I read the whole thing and review then but I HAD to review now.
This has to be one of the most twisted-ly (is that a word?), complicated and yet delicious fics I'd ever read. Just the thought of Jake and Bella sleeping together and having a baby that Ed and Bella would raise is so insane but I love it haha.
I alos wanted to review because you really hit the nail on the head on how Ed dominates and manipulates Bella. Is is rath annoying!
Im gonna shut up and read on... I think I'm gonna end up pulling a all nighter I cant stop reading lol
| Guns and Drums chapter 10 . 11/18/2011
This pretty much made my day. I came into it thinking: the girl's gonna sleep with her best friend to make her undead lover happy? This might be more effed up than his imprinting on her child. Holy shit... what if that still happens?
REGARDLESS, I really like how this came out. It was admittedly (as Jake points out) really, really demented in the beginning - as it should have been. If you made it seem dandy, it would've been worse. Reading through their weekend together I kind of figured Bella might end up leaving Edward simply for the fact that she just found out she really liked sex (to hell with the kid). I was really, really pleased that Bella made a decision, had an adult moment and left. She didn't runaway - and I think that's a good distinction to make. She went to clear her head and make an independent and informed decision for once in her goddamn life. I thank you for that; it's really easy for me to get down on Bella, sometimes - mostly because she does have such potential as a character but fails in the end. And I will admit that it would have been kinda sad if she came back and kicked Jake to the curb and flipped him the friend card, I still would have been happy. I'm just so glad she wised up and really thought about things. She matured a lot.
Similarly, I'm also glad for Jake's growth - because he was really hung up on her. I'm glad he at least showed signs of being able to be okay without her. Even if they were slight and slow.
| DeelectablyDee chapter 10 . 10/1/2011
Oh this was wonderful. I can't believe I haven't read this before.
Thank you xxx
| werewolfgrlz chapter 5 . 9/24/2011
| JustARead chapter 10 . 9/23/2011
So odd for her to end up with Jake but I enjoyed it :)
| JustARead chapter 8 . 9/22/2011
| JustARead chapter 6 . 9/22/2011
They actually did it?
| JustARead chapter 3 . 9/22/2011
Wow, this ought to be good