Reviews for Harry Potter's Reaction to the Marriage Law
mumphie chapter 1 . 3/25
I enjoyed your short story...and as always...wished for more! :)
mikkelibob chapter 1 . 3/1
Kudos. When I first got into fanfic, I only looked for novel length stories. But gems like this, only as long as they need to be, are really the hidden greatness of fanfic: shorter what-if works that would never really work commercially.
Zero Rewind chapter 1 . 3/1
Very well written and executed, much like your other storiesthanks for the read
MissNikita chapter 1 . 2/27
Finally an author with common sense, I love the idea of a marriage law fic, but most authors just make the characters obedient little puppets or only have some token resistanr.

Uhm come on peolle we are talking about legalised rape (both for wizards and witches) and forced pregnancy, always within a time frame thats just idiotic.

You wrote what the only responsible reaction should be, just wish it had been a bit longer lol
noreenklose chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
Very nice.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2016
this was good, I want it to continue
Miss Millie chapter 1 . 8/9/2016
Hello again,
I realy like your h&g stories! This is another one you could write more, it leads right into a whole new world of Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley stories, that no one has ever been to,
Good luck with all you do!
Miss Millie
N Flamel chapter 1 . 7/13/2016
Kevin, No idea why I've not left a review for the story, so here's one after reading it several times, and enjoying it each time. Two aspects stood out for me: the first is a fairly common theme - how backwards and constipated the British Wizarding Society is. Didn't any of the idiot Purebloods have an idea most of the eligible students would fight this insane 'law?' Obviously, they didn't and Harry, with lots of help, put together a brilliant plan to leave and retain their freedom of choice. The second aspect is that the story is screaming for you to tell us in detail what Harry and Company did. Did they eventually reclaim their homeland or create a new society that shames the Brits through its inclusive, creative ways to govern and educate all magic users. Another entertaining story. Thanks, N Flamel
lipasnape chapter 1 . 6/25/2016
Excellent solution for the Marriage Law plot.
AL chapter 1 . 1/27/2016
Great story! Love smart and proactive Harry, and the wizarding youth standing up to the ministry.
tanzar81 chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
Nope Hermione adopted after ten or so years working in her chosen field. And Ron married Luna. Or did Luna marry Ron?

I liked the story by the way.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2015
So who was harries going to be?
Gina Ichimaru's girl chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
I liked this one.
GeorgeTobor chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
Ron/Hermione is just one of Rowling's many, many, thoughtless mistakes, showing her lack of status as one of the great writers. Is JKR rich? Yes but so are the Lords of drug cartels. Rich does not equal good, as
shown by the Malfoys.

I like this story, all too many MARRIAGE LAW fics are rape fics in disguise.
Can anyone see those who fought against Voldemort not fighting a MARRIAGE LAW?

Some fanfiction writers are worse than Rowling, which takes effort.

Forced marriage contract fics can be rapes too.

Arranged marriage fics can be bad but are often used to give help a character might not otherwise get.

Rape is UGLY AND WRONG no matter where it is, in fiction or real life.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2015
I would like to massacre the wizengamot and all the remaining V sympathizers. If Harry can take down V, the rest should be easy.

But I can live with that ending too, it's just more ironic.
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