Reviews for Love is in the Air
Rachael thomson chapter 3 . 7/31/2017
Wow this is good
Viking Pirate chapter 13 . 11/23/2013
Grand story mate.
Winged-Wolf-Tsuki chapter 13 . 7/26/2013
I really liked your story I think you stuck with the characters personalities fairly well and the way they came to expressing their feelings for each other felt original and believable and i don't know about everybody else but I'm a big fan of lots of cuddiling 5 stars lol :-)
Kaleva chapter 13 . 3/28/2013
Please oh please update soon I beg you! The everything about this story is great! I would just request more detail in the lemon and your golden! And if you don't update soon, I will either preach twilight to you by PM or have Justin Bieber sing under your bedroom window! Whichever you hat more until you do update!
Maza the Gainer of Knowledge chapter 13 . 12/7/2012
Heh, nice story! Keep going with this! I am looking foward of the story's progress!
Killough chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
REALLY awesome story! Totally believable, and heart warmingly touching. A bit out of character during the sex scene, but still adoreable.
mizu chapter 13 . 8/13/2012
OMG! This was amaziiiiiiing! I love your writing. Tell me you'llake moooore! ; ;
Sarah chapter 4 . 7/16/2012
This is riveting! I'm so glad to find something that focuses on the bond between the pair, and the action sequences are so vivid, I feel like I'm right there. Reading on, I can't wait!
albsan chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
I liked your story love is in the air

wil you write more chapters?

Attentively albsan
T-D3 chapter 10 . 6/9/2012
"phew" this is the real shit great job brutha keep i9t up.
Emily Carrington chapter 10 . 12/11/2011
You have a real knack for ending each chapter with a cliffhanger, especially those featuring action. I also think you stayed true to the characters, from Jake and Chance all the way down to the creeplings. Congrats!

Look at the beginning of your three favorite books. Then look at your prologue. Your prologue is modeled after books from the 18th century, where telling rather than showing is emphasized.

Was that your intention?

In those three favorite books, read through the dialogue. Yours is pretty authentic- until intense emotion needed. See how your favorite authors accomplish this.

I know: I’m coming off hard. I apologize. But you have real talent, not to mention dedication, and I want your writing to improve. Your characterization and plot ideas are infallible; keep building on that sure foundation.

All the best,

Emily Carrington

www dot emilycarrington dot com, author of GLBT fantasy romance: “Dragon Food” and “Dragon Fire”, published at: www dot loose-id dot com
Zept chapter 13 . 12/4/2011
I really like Chance/Jake stories and so far this story is pretty good. I'm looking forward to your next update and I'm going to check out "Broken Heart, Lost Soul".
Cody Furlong chapter 13 . 11/23/2011
You better finish it! This is too good of a story to have it sat unfinished and hanging in the air teasing and temoing us.
Akuma the Dark One chapter 12 . 8/25/2011
Hi bud just wanted to say this was an okay story, only downfall is chapter 11 the yaoi in it seemed a little forced. Here's some advice from a fellow yaoi writer, when writing the yaoi try to see yourself acting out the love within the yaoi with someone you love and write down what you would do with your lover. I do this and my yaoi almost always come out as I want them but it does help that I'm gay and can get ideas from mine and my lover's time together. (Don't care what you think I love who I love) If that doesn't work for you try asking a yaoi writer to help with your yaoi they're more of us out there than you think.
strong man chapter 11 . 3/27/2011
The was the most sexyest porn ever,My member is getting as big as Chance's
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