|Reviews for incubus|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/11
| eekz chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
This was rather fantastic. You did an excellent job of explaining incubi in Whovian terms, of writing the Doctor's transitions from Totally There to Oh Shit, of capturing their emotions, and of writing "graphic violence" tastefully (for lack of a better word - although it struck me as a little odd that she could do so much with crushed wrists). I loved that the Bad Guy didn't really steal any page space, and that the TARDIS was helping - but the ending truly made this story great.
| Ashlee Pond chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Oh wow. This was just perfect. A brilliantly creepy, horrifying idea, executed so wonderfully. It's just.. wow. Beautifully written, you captured their characters and their interaction so well and I genuinely could not pick how it was going to end! Bravo.
| Lisa chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
I must have read this story about three times now, as I keep re-finding it.
I can honestly say its one of the best pieces of writing I've come across. You've got the characters spot on, despite the difference from their normal circumstances.
Your descriptions are fantastic, and detailed, and just draw the reader in. I particularly love the opening, since it asks so many questions and induces a feeling of panic.
You have a real talent, thank you very much for sharing.
| Dolphin64575 chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
Stunningly well written, great ending! Could be an episode, were it not for the very adult subject. And the way they won.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
aww it was great with a really cute ending
| Lohce Azcry chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Okay. Now that that's done, I'm going to go schedule a kitten therapy with Google Images. Thank you for the read.
| HollywoodGirl745 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Holy freaking crap, this story stabbed me in the heart. I've just started reading DW fanfiction, and I've never been confronted by the idea of the Doctor actually dying. I'm used to the episodes, where he's always okay. He's the king of okay.
I was so worked up that HE MIGHT DIE. It was then that I realized I care just as much about the Doctor as I do for real people in my life. Thanks for that.
Great writing, as you can tell I've had a crises reading this story. Thank you!
| Chairman-Meowith chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Lol this could almost be an actual episode
| Kathryn Hart chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
I love this! So emotionally raw and heartbreaking! and that last line is epic! Great job!
| RedHasNeverLookedSoBeautiful chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
When it was like 'The blood is caking all over her lips' it was written so well I thought my lips were bleeding... They were because of a cut but I still did think it was because you wrote it so well
Did that actually make sense?
| seekerchasing chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
how do you come up with all this amazing stuff? this one was much more dark and scarier then the others but still just as wonderful and really very thrilling. i was honestly expecting the Doctor to die so i was prepared to start crying but thankfully it didn't happen and there was a sweet ending. and i love the idea of a snow lever in the tardis
| thebadwitch13 chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
This is one of the best pieces of writing that I have come across on FF. Ever. It is, of course, completely wonderful,haunting,terrifing,beautiful,fantastic. I am trying to find the words,you see,to describe this masterpiece.
Yes, that word it a start...
Now. Your opening is filled with action, it sucks me in right away. And I love how slowly you revel the situation, how the black-outs and the blood and fear are introduced before even the true monsters identity is revealed. Your Amy is astounding- and your Doctor is...the Doctor. Never before have I read anyone capture the Doctor so completely.
There are some points that I loved: the part where both of them stare at each other "holding onto her own, like thier gazes could touch each other." Also, when your descibe Amy here "She is dizzy from the pain—blood is caking over her lips and her eyelashes and rolling in fat drops down her shoulderblades"- I could feel her pain, I could feel it and I shivered because I half expected to find myself bleeding.
And I adore how you fit in the relationship betwwen the TARDIS and Amy "Her head will feel so empty without her TARDIS"
The entire pool scene...there are no words... "I can't, I can't, I can't—/"Amy. You must trust me."
I hould hear the voices in my head, saying this.
And then the ending- how your Doctor doesn't know how to handle Amy scanning him...and then when he kisses her "so softly he thinks his heart might shatter".
| DoctorRosie chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
I love this so much. So damn much, a little hard to follow when The Doctor blacked out but amazinf none-the-less! :D
| ASHPD chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
"Fifteen…point…two three six seven…cucumber?" Literally peed myself. Best DW line ever. That one single line needs to be put in an episode.