|Reviews for Mary Faber on the Streets of London|
| CamiKlaus24-7 chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
NOOOOOOO NOT A CLIFFHANGER! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! THIS STORY IS SO GOOD
| YouDon'tWanttoKnow chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
NO! NOT LITTLE MARY! NOOOOOO!
I really like this by the way, well done, and we wouldn't judge you - we have no right- but could ye please toss in a bit more Cheapsides fines' curses? Could ye? Twud be right entertainin' it would, not that this ain't as it is. Is Charlie comin' to the rescue then? Please let 'im.
| crimson and bare chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Cool. But, don't do the author's note at the top. No one will judge you, this is better than most of what's on the site. A few of the lines are centered, so you might want to fix that. It's a little short. Other than that, this was really well written and I really liked it. Nice one. So happy you wrote a fanfiction and you did a really good job for your first! :)