Reviews for The Story of Farlo
Guest chapter 31 . 1/25/2017
justApenguin chapter 6 . 6/6/2016
this story is awesome, clearly a creative master who just poured a large bucket of passion all over 32 chapters.
0r1on chapter 3 . 8/8/2015
wow I was reading this while listening to music and realized how much death waltz (U.N. Owen was her) fits this fic
Kaitlyn chapter 31 . 2/17/2015
I loved you story VERY MUCH! I hope you continue, cant wait :-)
jellying tin tim chapter 11 . 12/10/2014
Yep I am deleting this from my reading list and fsdgjbrvdhuhfvkubhxdfkjhbfzkdjhbdjzckhbsdjhfvbfdvjhdsbfkuursbhvouhdsvoudhsfbosdfbvs GGGGGGRRRRRRRR
Pokepony lover chapter 10 . 12/10/2014
SO IS SNOW DEAD OR NOT I AM SO CONFUSED AND MAD AND SAD JUST LIKE ERIC566 he turned the pokemon into pchycopaths and killed them into the end
Templar lucio chapter 9 . 12/10/2014
Pokepony lover chapter 8 . 12/10/2014
Templar lucio chapter 7 . 12/10/2014
Ooh who the heck is xena and we'll never mind great story
Pokepony lover chapter 6 . 12/10/2014
Awesome I can't wait to read the next chapter
Templar lucio chapter 5 . 12/10/2014
Oh holes cow this is going to get way more messy than I expected
Feyster chapter 26 . 8/3/2014
And here I am reminded of why I should avoid most fanfictions. They always have the same plot involving save the world or save the balance, only the hero can do it, blah, blah, blah. Seriously? such a thing is bullshit. And Pokemon are MEANT to fight? really? What a great message to send out. Why don't we tell our pets to go fight till they pass out? I'm sure that's how it's meant to go huh? What your saying is pure idiocy. Your trying to put humans in a good light yet this doesn't do it at all. And Religion? We are meant to believe Religion is real? What do you take us for? Fools? There are many flaws with the story and I had believed the characters would push us through the story but there weak minds and wills obviously destroyed that chance. Everything in this fanfiction is predictable if you have ever once read another fanfiction of the same genre, it doesn't even have to involve Pokemon. I guess this goes to show how much this world has gone to shit and how far imagination in this world can go huh?. Call me harsh but I'm sick of these crappy fanfictions. I want something good and original, if that can't be delivered then what's the point? What message are you trying to send to your readers? Fighting with animals is okay? Or that all humans are dicks and you should feel ashamed for being one? Seriously, there are so many plot holes that don't make sense like, apparently Snow got her throat slit yet still lived with no immediate treatment afterwards? I'm sorry but that's a load of shit. And all the characters having something to do with the fight club? Isn't that just fucking weird? Must be a pretty fucking small world if that's all you ever FUCKING run into huh? I don't care if these are OC's people have given you,
Frostpoint26 chapter 31 . 5/20/2013
I wondering if your doing to continue this story or are you going to start a new one? You left a hint that there might be one
Dragon-Warrior-93 chapter 31 . 4/7/2013
excellent stoy cant wait for the sequel
Phairis chapter 31 . 3/28/2013
Gasp! When is the sequel to be released? I liked it x3


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