Reviews for One Lost Battle
inactive923 chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
OMG. Amazing...
SongoftheWolf chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
I like all the last death scene type of stuff. Stupid Peeta! WHY would he even be in the fight in the first place if Katniss wasn't there. Awwww, poor Gale. I think HE should have won Katniss. In an alternate reality, maybe Gale pushed Peeta into the soldiers, and then HE got Katniss. Just thinkin' outloud...
turtleducklings chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
I think this one's my favorite out of all the oneshots that you've written. It was great getting to beta it for you :)

OH! AND GUESS WHAT? This oneshot got nominated for Saddest Story/Best Tragedy in the Summer 20 The Hunger Games Fic Awards! I read it and was all, "AWWWH I'M SO PROUD OF HER."

You've grown so much as a writer since I've started beta-ing your works and I must say that I really AM very proud of you.

Bravo, m'dear :)

Narcissa-Weasly chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Good, like how Gale act.
Persephone's flower chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
A heart-wrenching tale of how Gale refuses to give up. Awesome work!
Maddie Beth chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
! ! rly good story tho :) well written
The Rainbow Catcher chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Very good! Loved it!
alexis chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
i thoght there would b more :(
Tour de Force chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
I liked it quite a lot! I think you did an excellent job with it. Plus, it seems like the way he would want to go. Really, the only thing I didn't like was that he did not end up with Johanna. But, that's not really important since pretty much no one other than myself ships that particular pairing.

Also, the last 4 lines were brilliant.
PenonPaperFingersonKeys chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
I love Gale so much and hate stupid "boy with bread". Very touching and emotional although I think that the sword thing is very medieval and this is meant to be set in the future...Maybe modern it up a bit more.
ttttttt chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
well that was depressing,,,, but good...