Reviews for The Unforeseen Heir
Cthul chapter 18 . 6/2
Sit down, shut up, and listen to my review you dumbass bitch. While this is relatively well written, you have failed to create a captivating story. I skimmed through it and found that literally nothing happens for 99% of this trash fic. Delete this shit dumbass faggot
Guest chapter 3 . 12/6/2023
that no good minto teme
Guest chapter 2 . 12/6/2023
damn him to hell
Aetherium21 chapter 5 . 1/18/2023
Absurd. As if random genins who don’t know baby Naruto is there would be allowed next to him. Not when grief could make them unpredictable
KEVIN DANIELS chapter 1 . 2/13/2022
the what in the oh God
Danirodriguez1995 chapter 21 . 9/26/2021
Please continue, the story is very good, Please don't give up, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a huge fan of this type of story and the truth is they have no comparison.
jellatinous chapter 1 . 2/25/2021
Oh god this is gonna be a shitfest
Imperial-samaB chapter 21 . 5/2/2020
This story is something
MirageSPL chapter 21 . 4/24/2020
I normally don't like OC's but Taiga was a very loveable OC. And now, I detest you.
PortgazDAdz chapter 21 . 4/8/2020
The whole fic was so easy to swallow nd then suddenly you had to kill someone... The last chapter felt completely unfair...!
Still loved this fic nonetheless...
Zirxces chapter 2 . 3/14/2020
I can only hope Tomodachi and Yamagawa get the slow, painful death they deserve in the next few chapters
NonSolus chapter 14 . 7/19/2019
I ... actually peed myself laughing.
NonSolus chapter 11 . 7/19/2019
All Hail The Burocracy and the Paper Gods!
josue chapter 21 . 7/2/2019
espero anciosamente un nuevo capitulo
THBehemoth chapter 1 . 6/3/2019
This is darker than the comedic gold that you usually had, can't wait to read more.
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