Reviews for The Unforeseen Heir
nanayoung chapter 11 . 2/26
Is it bad that I kinda wanna know what happened with Mario and the Princess? I mean, how did that situation work out?
asvaldson chapter 21 . 1/23
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD UPDATE! erm. I mean. wow, great story! I would love to see an update on this one. This is an awesome story!. I actually shed tears on the death of Taiga.
anonymous chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
just from reading his little authors note at the top I already know Im going to like this guy
The Black Lucifer chapter 13 . 12/19/2014
that omake about rin on drugs was just terrible, please, never right something that deep again, because im sure even you can see now, that it went way too far. thank you for actually writing the fic itself though, as its helping me understand why i need the viewpoints of other characters, and different emotions aside from anger, happiness and depression, and that the story each character has to tell are all equally important
10LawnGnomes chapter 21 . 11/15/2014
definitely one of the funniest stories i've read in a while :) hope you continue it.
Kyle37 chapter 14 . 11/7/2014
Holy shit that whole severed head thing was way overdone. I LOVED IT!
koper chapter 16 . 11/5/2014
The more i read it the more disgusted i'm with it. I have no ideaidea how can this be describet as humor
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 4 . 10/31/2014
hmm, well so far i will say its not bad at all... lets see where this will take me
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 3 . 10/30/2014
umm, who the fuck is Dragon? she can use Mokuton and its a she (i dont recall there being anyone other that Yamato who can use Mokuton)
Dairegh chapter 21 . 9/3/2014
Well... kuso. I really liked Taiga. : ( *sigh*
Such is ninja life, I guess.
Still, though...
phantom daniel chapter 21 . 8/26/2014
Update please
Dairegh chapter 2 . 8/24/2014
Uh ohs... Might be trouble in the future for those two doctors. XP
Lancelot Seiten 1 chapter 21 . 7/31/2014
This is a really good story so far and I have really enjoyed reading this so far.

I sincerly hope that you intend to comtinue with this story and hopefully make some more omakes.

LS 1
Guest chapter 21 . 7/16/2014
Please continue the story it's soo fun and awesome almost brought a tear to my eyes when tai-chan died which btw fuck you for that she deserved better than to die

But yeah please return to the story and make it awesomeness continue
Guest chapter 21 . 6/30/2014
Taiga's...dead?...she's gone...kill yourself. Great story though
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