|Reviews for Girl on Fire|
| gr8rockstarrox chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
Even with just 600 odd words, you manage to a weave a story so bright and beautiful. I'm awed. :O
| LilyL.W.Potter chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
I really liked
| oceaning chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Awwwww :) This was sadsad beautiful ;) Well done! :D
| coeurfeyrac chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
I have got to stop being such a drip.
But your stories just get to me!
Maybe I should get a life...
Nah, I like it better here :)
| LaPaige chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
I love her struggle through this. Mostly I read one-shots with Lily being fierce and telling Teddy it's right, but this is a great side of her. I love how you write her insecurity, and how real you make her.
Wonderful writing, as usual :)
| yellow 14 chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
Very nice piece and just a bit sad. Shame he won't listen to what his heart is telling him. Keep writing
| MEL chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
That was such a great story! It's just really touching. :) Well done.
| lonely hands chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Oh, this was heartbreaking :o But oh so beautiful :)
I love how conflicted Lily is here and how she can't bring herself to regret, but also how really, in the end, it's going to make her a stronger, better person- I've never really seen anything that's been able to do that before.
Really, really lovely :)