|Reviews for No body touches my Hermione|
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 1/26
I liked this story very much. I did see that some other reviewers think this is a 'Dark Harry' story. That only shows that they really don't understand you or your stories.
In fact, you're one of the least understood writers on FFN, IMMHO. You cover so many facets of Harmony and find ways of finding and polishing and exploring each facet, that the less observant mistake you for being 'repetitious' or 'writing the same story over and over again'. Simply ain't so.
Here, you take a number of elements familiar to your stories, combine them in a new way and marry it to one of your greatest themes: Harry Potter will do anything it takes to save Hermione Granger.
This is not to say that this is a flawless offering. You did make a tremendous continuity error in here. When Harry hears Molly berating Ron for missing a potion dosing of Hermione, she tells him that he should have remembered since he'd been dosing her since the summer before SIXTH year; the the rest of the story operates as if the dosing began before Bill and Fleur's wedding, the summer before the SEVENTH year.
The fix is pretty easy. Go back to the summer of 1996, write a note from 'Albus' apologizing for keeping Harry from Hermione after the Department of Mysteries fight and urging him to tell Hermione about his feelings for her.
Yes, it will lead to confusion in the sixth year, but it should go much easier without Ron.
D. Page Robin
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| Guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
Please finish this story for your fans
| desireejones99 chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
Now that was harrowing, Don't mess wth his Hermione
| Antor2001 chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
Brutal. Good job bad-ass Harry.
| ElementalMaster16 chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
pretty interesting! i would like to see a second chapter to see what changes areb brought by these actions though (_)
| LyricalWisdom chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
I would love to read more about this.
| Deathday Party Planner chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
Of all the things Dombledore could have given HHr in canon before or after his death to help with their hunt, I always felt a time turner would have been the most beneficial. A terrific oneshot, one that you should seriously consider expanding into a much bigger project.
| Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
Heh-heh! Good riddance to evil rapists! :-P
| Jonn Wolfe chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Nice. Wonder what happened after? If you write it, I'll read it. )
| william488 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Nice. Quick simple and great subject.
| madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
And why would the headmaster help him? Wuldn;t he just love this?!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
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| B. Oots chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
I just found the story. I really liked it.