Reviews for A Beautiful Night
Acaybay chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
You might want to make this fic much more longer. Um like what CoolKid54 said you have to make it more detailed and so. Other than that the story looks fine.
CoolKid54 chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Just to let you know umm the story didn't really match the title I'm not being mean to you, but you just have to make the story match the title, and umm also make this story a little bit more detailed, like umm Once there was beautiful nine year old girl named Gabriella or something like that