Reviews for Rich Love
Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
its awesome so far
screamambrosia chapter 3 . 3/6/2011
maaake more , im know im really late at reading this ! but please do make more :D looove gaara & sakura and iloove the waay yu make his attitiude c[x
ArisonUchiha chapter 3 . 12/17/2010
update soon
sparkling apples chapter 3 . 8/29/2010
lmao, serial killers xD
Freak-show101 chapter 3 . 7/26/2010
Cindy M 19 chapter 3 . 7/21/2010
cool very funny history, i love the history
Cindy M 19 chapter 2 . 7/21/2010
keep going with it, but are sort i love the chapter update soon
Cindy M 19 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
is very sort, keep going with it, i love the chapter
deathbyinsomnia chapter 3 . 7/14/2010
i had a nightmare where teddy bears tried to kill me when i was 5


but it is a rly good story if u don't update soon i'll be mad (O 3 O)
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
that's good!
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 2 . 7/10/2010
there is nothing bad about too much desciption!
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
as i didn't see the first version i say you should keep going!
Slake13 chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
I think that it was a good story. Try making the details a little less...this is constructed crticism so please don't take it the hard way please do continue I seriously wanna read more
Lindy Rose chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Yaaaaay first review! (yeah I'm a nerd like that! what of it?)

Welllllll I am going to give you some ConCrit that I wish was given to me when I first started my writing way back when

We really do NOT need to know EXACTLY where her dressers are and what color each individual thing is. If you want to try and give the reader the feel of the room describe the mood of it, the color scheme(VAGULY), why she has it that way, if she likes it. The story isn't about the decor it's about the characters so try and tie it into Sakura. It's her room it should mean something to her. And if it doesn't then that's relative to her as well

Overall this chapter is mostly describing irrelivant things. We don't see any personality or emotions in her behavior save for her examining her hair and the one smirk.

I can't say whether you should continue writing this story or not cause we haven't seen any of the plot and no real characterization yet but I would recomend revamping this chapter.

Good luck! The first story is always the hardest but you can do it!