Reviews for Nine Days
BlatantBookworm chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
Ooh! Yes! I've always wondered about Zoro's nine days of captivity. It's great to see such a good author taking this matter into their own hands.
The Phantom Dragon chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
I enjoyed this so much my canon bunny is ignoring the fact he was actually there for three weeks. More please
Lady of the Shards chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
This is wonderful. It seems like what could have really happened. You have to wonder, what if he had been tied a little differently? What if he had been able to sleep? What would Helmeppo's reaction be? And the marines with him? Maybe he actually fell asleep on the first day so they retied him so that he couldn't?
Moonlight Calls chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Lol I love when inspiration hits too, but most of the time I'm without paper and forget... Lovely one-shot!
RenKain chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Wow, I like the break down of the days in this one. They're all very believable, too. And Luffy being described as 'unquestiionably crazy' seems to fit very well lol.
It's not as active and exciting as some of your others, but it is very descriptive and entertaining. And I've always found it cute and amusing that the badass Pirate Hunter Zoro has a soft spot concerning the safety of kids XD. It's pretty endearing, honestly.
I love this story!
Faux Reves chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
This was wonderful. You made Zoro's punishment so agonizing. When I first read it in the manga I didn't think much of it, but it's only logical that it should be that painful!
Vheeri chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Reviewing from my phone again lol. I loved this. You could totally pull off an Impel Down fic or other canon prison related fics. Or even if one of the strawhats was sold to slavery in Sharbondy. Just a suggestion. Though, for the sake of the rating I guess, what about Zoros other human needs? I mean, I think Luffy and Brook are the only members ever who show real human body functions regularly.
Ubiquitous Placebo chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
This is exactly what happened in those 9 days! Or at least pretty darn close to what happened! Very in character! The diction makes it easy to picture the scenes and give the images I'd expect to see. "The SUN was BEGINNING TO SET, and with a GRIM NOD he SETTLED IN for the month." XD
cy-grl chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
I have only recently entered the OP fandom so I guess I'm still a noob, but so far I find your work the most intriguing!
SunSun chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
The ending paragraph had a really nice feeling.

I can imagine Zoro siting back on the boat, watching lluffy complain about being hungry wile thinking "eh, this aint too bad"
crystalbluefox chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
really like this story as well. Your telling is good, and it makes me wanna read long long stories written by you. I enjoy reading it, and I can't wait to read the last One Piece story that you got

I know that I'll gonna enjoy it *smiles*

Have a nice day!

Pernille
BakaSatsumi chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Wow this was brill! I have had this thought cross my mind about what he did before Luffy came but it was only a passing thought. This was really great
Lenighma chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
*MEMORIES*

First arc of One Piece...*sigh* MEMORIES. Nice oneshot!
Sincynati chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Wow. This was very good. Very thought-provoking. :)

I adore how you described Luffy. So accurate, haha. You kept everyone in character very well, and just... wow. :)

There wasn't a bit of dialogue, which I really like- I always appreciate an author who's able to pull of a narrative like that. :)

It was very well done, keep writing!

-Sincynati
Saiyura chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
HOLY COW! I have never seen anyone do anything like this to explain the days Zoro was captured... I mean... Dang... I love this.

Also, not much to add... maybe a bit more detail to lengthen it out and make the scene more list Zoro is saying it instead of a short written journal entry
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