|Reviews for Some Words on Memory|
| Helena chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
I have read this story many a time over, and it never fails to give me something new to contemplate, to cherish. Like life, this story reads bitter-sweet and warm and awful and all those other adjectives that sink away when you want them most. Thank you, so much, for this work of absolute beauty. It leaves me breathless and completely alive.
You have a gift that we are lucky to have experienced in such a setting as fanfiction. I hope to recognize your writing someday in a novel or other work of literature. If not, you have graced the fandom with a piece of pure beauty. Thank you again. H
| CutieSOS chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
| Malapropian chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
This was beautiful and painful. I can't recall the last time I had my heart broken so satisfyingly.
Shisui was perfect. Everyone was characterised so precisely right. I think this might be my favorite Hinata so far, but it makes me a little sad that-to me-correctly characterised Hinata always makes such painful sacrifices.
This has made me wish that more people would explore Hinata/Shisui.
| anlmoon chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
very well written. I like the story alot. Thank you. Though I wasn't quite sure it this was linear since it switches from differnet points
| CreativeChilde chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
i am now going to scream and cry and eat ice cream
how could you do this
how could you do this to me
why would you
all my feelings
and all these words and this this all
| Celestial Secrets chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
This is utterly beautiful. The pain and bittersweet romance you created nearly brought me to tears several times while reading. I've always been a fan of Shisui and Itachi, and I've always rather liked Hinata and Itachi, but the three of them is just so perfect. The way you wrote this story has made the three of them the most perfect menage a trois romance I've read in a very long time.
| Ms Arano chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
This is a really good story. I probably shouldn't have read it when I was already feeling maudlin, because now I'm holding back tears, but this is still something that I will come back and reread another time.
| hakuen chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
I feel like crying is dishonoring the greatness of this story somehow, but I can't help it anyway. This is epic in the very best way. I am so amazed by your work here. (Now I have to go read what else you've written *g* but, some other time. I'll have to be chewing on this one for a while, I think.)
It's too painful to read again right away but I know I won't be able to not read it again soon. How fucking awesome is Hinata in this, ok. I would love you for that alone, but then Shisui! and Itachi! and ALL THREE OF THEM. Capslock is not enough to express the levels of awesome. And heartbreaking.
| Rivendell chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
I love the vagueness that means so much more than exact words. Your brilliance shines in what you show, rather than what you tell. Gorgeous!
| nwyd chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
i am crying so badly right now.
i love this.
thank you for writing this.
| ssapientia chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Beautiful, honestly and truly one of the most amazing fan-fictions I have ever had the pleasure to read. Being able to provide such imagery and emotion into words.. wow it's really a gift you have (and I envy)
| YingYang890 chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
So beautiful, I wanted to cry near the end. Keep up the good work, and thank you for posting this story.
| ncfan chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Breathtakingly tragic. You've sold me on the idea of Shisui x Hinata, let me tell you that. As with your other works, you manage to maintain a balance between the utterly tragic and the hopeful.
My favorite scene, though, was when Shisui called Naruto out. Is it wrong to like a scene like that? I hope not. While I usually like the blond idiot, he does have the tendency to misjudge situations and this was certainly one of those times.
Anyway, great piece.
| m101 chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
man this is so beautifully written- made me cry keep up the good work!
| Unky chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Your portrayal of Shisui in this fic reminds me so much of Alan Alda as Hawkeye in M*A*S*H. Sorry if that's unflattering somehow, and as unrelated as they are, wow.