|Reviews for Some Words on Memory|
| silt chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
oh hell, how i cried!
| The Cello Mistress chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Damn, you are good at Heart wrenching Stories .
| Aergiia chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
GAH. I know I'm a sucker for tragedies but damn it, why does Shisui always die? The moment I read "Then there is nothing," I thought, "SHIT Shisui's gonna die." And lo and behold, he dies in the next three paragraphs. ;_; Don't take this as a complaint, it's just that I always end up crying by the time I finish your fics and... I can't take anymore emotional (Shisui) abuse... Dx
I'm sure you get this a lot already, but you're a really, really, great writer, you know? I never thought a Shisui/Hinata/Itachi triangle could work... but you made it work. Hell, you make EVERYTHING work. And... even MORE Hell, you're one of the main reasons I got into Shisui/Itachi (it's my OTP now hur hur) in the first place! If only fanfiction was the kind of literature read in school... I would definitely pay more attention... Now THAT'S worth analyzing and writing essays about! Gah.
- Wingless Fallen Angel
| Liz irishmoon003yahoo.com chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
I can't really describe how truly heartwrenching yet wonderful this story is. There are no words. I've always loved your writing, but I believe you just surpassed yourself. I look forward to seeing what you'll write next. Keep up the great work!
| Heise chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
oh my god. this was so ...
this blew my mind away.
you blew my mind away.
| Tenflowers chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
This is SO sad...
| Likes to Smile chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
I cried. It was seriously sad D
Shisui dies ALL THE TIME TT
I enjoyed it though
| theprincesshime chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
This fic was amazing. AMAZING! I'm reeling in the emotional aftermath right now... I'm sure I'll have to read this again to fully appreciate it because right now I'm dizzied with all of it's dazzling, sparkly-ness.
Shisui, I love how he's the bridge between them. I can't believe I never noticed the parallel between Itachi and Hinata (I love you for pointing that out btw).
And Shisui...I am just so...satisfied/overjoyed/happy that he loved Hinata too. It just...it was right. You always make it RIGHT.
There are never any loose ends with you (unless the fics is still in-progress) and this fic is no exception. I never finish a fic and feel jilted with you. (um...apparently I don't know the meaning of 'jilted'. I had to look it up just now because I kept trying to spell it with a 'g' and the spellchecker was harassing me. I guess I should have said 'cheated' but that's not what I mean either.)
Y'know sometimes you walk away from a movie/book/fic and think, what the heck, I wasted so many odd hours and at the end you're not satisfied with any of it. You shake your head and wonder at the stability of the universe. Did something change while you weren't looking? ANYWAYS, with your fics, I never feel that way. I walk away sobbing, or smiling, or in an emotional frenzy, but the world isn't the one spinning.
| Willow-Bee the Cat chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
A little disturbing-mostly because of the descriptions of war-but very nice. I loved it.
| Medicinal Biscuit chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
AHHHH! That was seriously the only way it could end. This was so beautiful. It took me a while to get the format, but it was wonderfully done. Especially, as always, the last section. Took my breath away. You made their weird little threesome seem so right...just can't get away from the ItaSui? But I loved it. It was great. Very poignant, very tragic.
| Madam Grey chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
This is beautiful. You touched that spot in my heart. You characterize everyone so well that you make them your own. Shisui's humour made the ending all the more heart-wrenching. One of my favourite parts had to be when he laid it on Naruto up one side and down the other. I also loved reading their relationship develop and see everything tie in. The details you add in concerning the manga and the time frame and other characters really give something to the story. I'm sure you get this a lot: you're writing is amazing, and it is such a treat to read. It was the perfect length, actually as I got nearer to the end, I looked at the scroll bar to see if I was only half way down the page but alas... :) I have no critique.
| Demeterr chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
Wah, such a tragic ending. Beautiful story.
| Swiggle chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
My god. I'll leave a more cohearent review later. But holy shit, crying so hard right now. This story was VERY well done.
| frogflower chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
I've got to say, you write war stories very well. I can also see why you like writing Itachi/Shisui stories. I don't know much about Shisui from the manga but that's ok because I like your description better. I do hope that you journey back to writing Hinata stories even if it is for a bit because no one compares to how you write her.
| minaghostwolf chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
I am awed, i loved this story! I've never seen an Itachi/Hinata/Shisui triangle before and it was done brilliantly. Love it! Great writing! _