Reviews for Neji Gaiden
Guest chapter 6 . 3/1
please update
Guest chapter 6 . 7/19/2013
Thank you so much for all the time and effort tat you put into writing this because I loved very singly second of reading and staying up all night fangirling and learning. You are inspiring . thank you once again. This has been the best and most legit nejiten I have ever read. You never continued this. That is all right it is because of kishi. He never gives team gai a chance.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/17/2013
This was AWESOME. Ah I love this so much
Guest chapter 3 . 7/17/2013
"perhaps one day even I shall find such happiness…" This particular line was so much harder to read now that he is dead.
And a HUG? FINALLY A HUG. How you write NejiTen perfectly. Ahhh this story is amazing. Thank you. Thank you. THANK YOU
Guest chapter 2 . 7/17/2013
Brilliantly written. I LOVED how Neji admitted he finally admitted to himself he could not have at the time beat Lee. That was just THE moment for me. Thank you for this very perfect writing and chapter.

And in almost every fanfiction they have the teams rest when the finish early I wonder if they really do let them off to rest. There were so many things I loved about the chapter and so many things at the time I thought I'd point out in the review and tell you, you did them brilliantly but the chapter is too long and I am too hyped and want to go a head to the next chapter to really concentrate. BUT thank you for this
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
Thank you so much for writing about my favorite team. Team Gai. I actually love all the teams in Naruto equally but since Team Gai is the one team that has the least amount of screen time I get more excited to see them or read about them. Thisis the first time I am reading about Neji and he seems so Neji. And I just love your writing. You are so very talented and inspiring. Thank you so much for writing this
Guest chapter 6 . 6/21/2013
I wonder what would have happened if when they took the tags off (Team Gai) , and then left immediatley, what would have happen? Because if they left immediatley, they wouldn't have seen the ground rising and wouldn't have realized it was a trap. I wonder if they would have been chased by the clones XD. But is an interesting thought
Boo chapter 6 . 4/18/2013
Please please please update! I don't mean to put pressure on you or anything (i hope) but your stories are amazing and I see that this was last updated in 2010 xD I want to see what'll happen when neji... Yknow... And I wanna read all the events leading up to that too! Seriously, I love your fics so much, they're wonderfully written and such awesome reads :D
Jasmine Junior chapter 6 . 3/15/2013
Oh wow! Such a great job!
I enjoyed reading it!
Jasmine Junior chapter 5 . 3/15/2013
Oh Neji, u little perv...;
Jasmine Junior chapter 4 . 3/15/2013
Read and luv every words!
Jasmine Junior chapter 3 . 3/15/2013
I like the last scene!
Jasmine Junior chapter 2 . 3/15/2013
'Still find him cute, Tenten?'
Jealous baby? ;)
Jasmine Junior chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I like it! :D
Sekiryou Hyuuchiha chapter 6 . 1/29/2013
Wow, your last omake had me rolling xD Well, not rolling. I'm barely well enough to crouch right now. Damn flu. Anyway this story was what I'd been looking for all along! I love retellings with my interests (in this case, NejiTen) highlighted! And yes, they were very IC. You managed to capture Neji's icy exterior, the same personality he'd displayed during the Chuunin exams, while retaining his inner softness for his team, and showed him warming up perfectly. I feel the way you connected it to the main story of the manga was done well too, especially when you connected it to their first manga appearance. The Gai piggyback part also had me reeling with laughter. I'd forgotten Kakashi's ridiculous look as he flailed about lol.

I also had a feeling you weren't done with this story, since it didn't feel like you'd concluded it, but I understand why the updates would be infrequent. Really interested to see what you do when it comes to the part where Neji dies in the manga. Much more prefer this to Kishi's work!
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