Reviews for The Sealed Kunai
Centaurious chapter 3 . 8/25/2016
His muscles were underused while under a gravity seal... Nope, not buying it. Gravity seals are used to strengthen the body. Adjust to a larger body and changed chakra network... OK to a limited degree. Re-learn jutsu? No way! Get his speed of doing the hand signs I agree with, but he KNOWS how to do the jutsu's he's learned.
Crusade chapter 28 . 8/25/2016
How did kankuro and temari get jonin before naruto again? He was chunin while they were genin, he has been chuunin for 2 years now, pretty sure he should have been promoted by now, he kinda took down an s rank dude as well...
blahblahblech chapter 69 . 8/21/2016
I am very late to the story, but it was well done.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/20/2016
1536-hollister/t/cgmMTzq-lnk
AddictedDucky chapter 30 . 8/20/2016
More rants please!
Crusade chapter 11 . 8/17/2016
Dude, dead bone pulse doesnt make you fucking near imortal, that fight should have ended way earlier —_—
Arrexu chapter 48 . 8/15/2016
how can jiraiya scribble porn scenes on his notbook with one fucking hand while standing in Tsunade's cursed office filled with paperwork?
I'm known as Xana chapter 14 . 8/14/2016
I'm just going to stop right here for a moment before continuing to say that I love this story so much. The humor in this is comedy gold and the fact that it transitions from that to seriousness so smoothing is just beautiful. Dunno if it was your intention or not but this is the most beautiful thing I've read and it's only the beginning.
-Xana
Cap'n S4lty chapter 13 . 8/9/2016
Harem? Really? Waiiiiiiiiiii! ;-;
Elarmi chapter 69 . 8/8/2016
Man that was a really cool story ! The whole story was interesting even if the start was a little sloppy at times but after that, that was excellent ! The whole plot with root was great, your characters are really well writing (i love your Sai and Danzo) and your OC (Maki and Hamako) are really cool, i wish they were in canon. Oh and the way you writes the fighting scenes, they're excellent !

You have done a really good job !

So first i've read "Better Left Unsaid" (I love it), Then this one (really good too), the next one is "Great Clan Days"

See you on your next story !
Blitzstrahl chapter 47 . 8/2/2016
Well shit Obito still gets the E.M.S. did Itachi have time to destroy Shusui other eye? Or is it now a heirloom of the crows?
Blitzstrahl chapter 42 . 8/2/2016
You went with Fan Girl Karin...disappointing.
CriticalParty chapter 63 . 8/1/2016
You realize I have to turn to alcohol to finish your stories now? I have turned to alcoholism to read this boring chapters. Do condone such behavior? Back to the story though, it felt uneventful and suigetsu is not amused with your chapter. Stop rapping, you fuck. But seriously, the chapter felt a little slowly paced, hopefully by the year 2019 I'll be done reviewing your story.
Guest chapter 36 . 8/1/2016
Damn it Tsunade! Shizune wants what Shizune wants and she wants an Icha-Icha Movie that stars Naruto in it!

Spell checks weird:
Tsunade-Sundae
Shizune-Seizure
Icha-Icha-Cha-Cha
Icha-IChat and Icahn
Seriously, all but the last I get but what the hell?
Kami-Kitsune-Kage or Kage-Kitsune-Kami
Ja Ne.
Guest chapter 35 . 8/1/2016
Dude, that second Omake was hilarious! I'm sure that I've never read a story where the Kage Bunshin transfer the effect of a hangover before... at least that I remember... maybe... I swear that I've read all of the legible stories at LEAST THREE TIMES... or more... Damn... they all kinda cluster together after awhile... and I feel like a sorry pitiful fuck right now, especially as I realize that I've wasted YEARS of my life reading, searching for, rereading, attempting to locate and either succeeding or failing to find, any good stories on this most cursed and blessed site. It's both a pitiful and awesome feeling... I hope to whatever deities exist that I've NOT already posted the 'Hangover thing' before today... that's just awkward.

Anyway, awesome chapter and all that formality crap.
Oh and for the record, my stupid-as-fuck Pen name don't like the 'name bar' above, and I'm kind of a lazy fucker, meaning I completely forgot my password and don't feel like going through the damn hassle of resetting it JUST to sign in and THEN just log BACK out... I'm lazy, not retarded... so back to the point, my pen name is either Kage-Kitsune-Kami or Kami-Kitsune-Kage... this next part isn't directed towards you Kenchi, but you can use it if you want/need/have to or just for shits and giggles *and if someone bitches ta me about it, I say. Look. The. Fuck. Above, and... kindly... GO TO HELL!* And that's why I've got the Seven Sins AND the Four Horsemen on speed dial... Also my reason for needing a psychiatrist every month to settle issues that keep me from ending up dead, in prison for various possible reasons, or a psyche ward for obvious 'Issues' regarding 'insanity'... I'm not 'insane'... It's much MORE likely that a MAJORITY of the human race JUST isn't on MY level of sanity... Maybe THEYRE the INSANE ones... Not you though... you're saner than me. And yes, I'll type ALLLLLLL of this and STILL won't reset my dumb fuckin' password... cause my pc hates me and all of this would go to waste... I hate 'waste'. The word itself pisses me off!
Ja Ne
Kage-Kitsune-Kami or Kami-Kitsune-Kage (just in case)
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