And the story is guided (thus not a what if, instead its just copy-paste from Kishanoob with a few changes that... well do not matter since the story WILL be the same anyway ;p pointless), Rasengan is just as over-hyped useless garbage (i mean Kabuto survives it and he is both unrequired for the plot and a weakling so...) that will probably like in Kishamotos case work only ever on the final boss nothing else on the way.
Thus i will also assume that like in Kishamotos case Naruto will take a backseat in the story while Sasuke becomes main character... how is this reviewed as top fanfic? I can just go watch Naruto and it will be the same failed story.

Crazy Chao

Honestly, I love the story so far, but oh my god the way you handle the girls in this story genuinely hurts my soul. From Hamako leaving him outside, to girls like Tenten treating him like he did something wrong... it's honestly something that hurts this story in my opinion. They walk all over the dude who genuinely tries to do right despite being trained by someone like Danzo and has the Kyuubi in his ear. What is the immense level of disrespect about? Everything about the story is good, but oh my god Naruto is a bitch when it comes to the girls, he allows himself to be treated like garbage. He is worked to the bone, and still tries to be in Konoha, even at the risk of disobeying his first sensei's teachings which are not to disobey!

Absolutely fantastic Naruto fanfic. What a great read with twist and turns, not following the original story and making it your own. Must read for those that enjoy Naruto, Bravo!

Thank you the novel, was great

awsome as always

"and label myself retarded?" only the finest lines. You are the man.

incredible chapter. you the man!

Fucking hilarious with the top 20 shit list the best one was the beef

Dropped for fucks sake everytime i give your stories a chance there is always some bullshit that happens that makes me want to drop it kimiaro is way too op not because of the story of naruto but because you are a fanboy making him that way.

Don't the tailed beasts aid in repelling genjutsu? Is that not a part of their deal? Even if it is why wouldn't Kurama do it to spite the Uchiha considering his hatred of them?

Ahhh the satisfaction, one of the best naruto stories out there i love it.

Loved that fight and the way he finished him of was fit perfectly

ch 1 was good but everything else was no good

Ch2 review, Naruto (MC) is giving speeches instead of fighting... Just Lame!