Reviews for The Sealed Kunai
CelticReaper chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
hell yeah! awesome chapter

update soon please, i want to read more
Dakars revolution chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
Coool. Yea like the waterfall is really where they want to go? O and the shikamaru and taya bit about naruto was funny and plot moving.
GoldenGod Rah chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
Great chapter man. I tottaly agree, konan Is badass now. She is now Offically in my top five favorite kunoichi list. Right up there with Yugito, Fū, Yūgao, and Mei. Atleast madara lost an eye to Konan. That's Probably a pretty big loss for an uchiha.
irezel chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
duh, duh, duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh...but really, the whirlpool is the place they WANT to go, because below it is the place they want to be...because YEAH. XD can't wait for more!
hockeygirl9 chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
yay new chapter! btw i was so excited when i read that nagato was an uzumaki! i can't wait for the next chapter! yours too! please update soon!
OuroborosKai chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
Another great chapter. Man I was fucking surprised when Madara was all like ' that trademark Uzumaki red hair now turned snow white '
barryc10 chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
Nice. Please update soon.
korrd chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
I feel that they could have done something else to make Madara infallible than making his eye capable of doing EVERYTHING! As for the Nagato as an Uzumaki, I feel it lends credence to my idea of Naruto getting the Rinnegan.
Wyrtha chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
Great chapter ... though I'm hoping Naruto gets something out of his trip ... I look forward to seeing where the whirlpool takes him and Sai.
Dan chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
Hate the cliched overuse of the word 'shithead' by Tayuya- it gets really ol really quickly. We know from canon she has a bit of a foul mouth but fanfic just makes this character point tiresome by overstating it.

Hate the kyuubi talking like a modern day american. "I would be pissed" "Go fuck yourself"- its not 'fresh' or 'cool', its just out of place for what we know of the kyuubi. Overuse of 'ningen' is also a failing point- we get it, but in the manga how manga/anime times have you read/heard the kyuubi refer to anyone as such? He's not human, we get it, but the whole 'ningen' every sentence suggests a real lack of imagination from you.

You're not exactly giving the kyuubi the sense of ancient, powerful otherworldly-ness that you're aiming for. Description is essential for that; description of atmosphere, feeling and writing the Kyuubi in a manner that makes its magnitude of its presence almost tangible.

Everything else was good except for the kyuubi and tayuya who've i've grown tired of already.
Orchamus chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
Naruto..the new mind rape. Oh, and Konan does kick ass, doesn't she? Nice chapter, liked the load of seals used, but damn, they got matched up bad in terms of who to fight.
volrath77 chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
[rant] Well, in answer to your apparently vexed sentiment on Madara, the only possible answer is: Kishimoto has run out of creative ideas on what powers to be given to Narutoverse ninja at this point in time and thus, have pitifully resorted to from one deus ex machina to another when it comes to the godless Uchihas. I mean seriously, 600 billion explosive notes and even that isn't capable of killing the bastard? Suspension of disbelief can only go so far before it fails and cheap tactics like that becomes utterly annoying. Someone might point out that he lost one eye because of Izanagi. So what? He has stocked Sharingan eyes already. So, you see what I mean by deus ex machinas? [/rant]

Going back to the chapter...more Tayuya! Somehow the image of her stomping on Shikamaru's stomach and in denial to boot comes as cute. Heh, can't wait until the the day comes when Shikamaru's prediction comes true. :D
road kill609 chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
Way to use a typical movie device... next chapter... not complaining btw. Yeah, Konan went from being a little bitch to actually being awesome in 2.5 second. And no, I highly doubt that Kishimoto will even mention Nagato as an Uzumaki more than once. That guy can be a real dick sometimes.
mfmxxx chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
I agree with the last chapter in the manga, although I agree with you about Nagato being an Uzumaki, I had a suspcion when I first saw both his and Kushinas hair color in the anime, as it was the same, but never paid much mind to it.

Anyways, amazing chapter, and it looks like shika might be putting peices of the puzzle together...
Gogolu chapter 22 . 9/18/2010
Cool.
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