Reviews for Within your arms
AngelSlayer135 chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
A nice little fluffy lemon, descriptive where it needed to be but still fairly in character for both of them. Reads a bit oddly during some of the conversations though, for instance it read like he had already taken her virginity when they were talking about it.
Lewis-Sama chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Good story, with Raven first being scared of her powers and then just giving in.
REDEADED chapter 1 . 5/27/2012

Anthony1l chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Vivid and true to form!
Nobody chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Wonderfully written.
Protector of men chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
i'm not telling you chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
that was the best Teen Titan story i'v ever read! (i'v read many)
Patrick JLouis chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
This story was written out very good. It almost can be publish and set on a bookshelf. I loved how you fracture a girl's first time and I like how you let Beast Boy be mature and understanding to Raven's emotions. But I only wished you had wrote about how Beat Boy started to change to like billions of different animals while they were having sex. It would be funny to see Raven take in a HUGE horse penis! Lol
Wolvmbm chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Nice idea for a one shot tale. :D

Very cute little first time indeed. :D

Please do keep up the good work upon such great ideas like this one for future stories. ;)
RavenBeastBoy chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Awwwww, that was so cute! i like the lemon scene, but too bad your not gonna continue the story. damn it. anywayz, this is good! and i've read ALOT of lemon scenes