Reviews for The Unconfident Con
missnaira chapter 3 . 11/3
Что это было? А! Знаю! Это было издевательство. Автор почему-то решил, что он умеет писать. Но он ошибается: писать он не умеет. Это было ни о чём. Но автор ещё и считать не умеет, и плохо и невнимательно смотрит сериал. Нилу 28 лет в третьем сезоне. Он разговаривает с Элен. Бывшая напарница его отца говорит, что они не виделись почти десять лет, как он сбежал в день своего 18летия. 18 10 28. Всё просто. Нил начал свою карьеру в 18, его поймали приблизительно через 4 года плюс почти 4 в тюрьме плюс два года работает на ФБР. Вот и 28 лет. Автор, не пишите больше.
RCs Fix chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
I enjoyed your start from the first meeting idea. Peter calling Neal an 'idiot' gets a reaction Neal isn't used to giving, but he'll do anything to protect the people he holds close to his heart.
IcyJadeXOXO chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Peter was right! I think Neal got too over confident and thought that he was smarter than Peter...that, therefore, made him an idiot! D
Stroma chapter 3 . 8/8/2010
Very good.
Stroma chapter 2 . 6/20/2010
great
Stroma chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
very good.
Sparky Dorian chapter 3 . 6/19/2010
Oh, poor Neal... This was a good chapter! They were both very in character.
peppe1951 chapter 3 . 6/19/2010
good story...too bad he couldn't have gotten a confession from Neal and possibly a reduced sentence...
Sharon chapter 3 . 6/18/2010
Great chapter! And thanks for considering doing a courtroom fiction. I don't believe anyone else has done that.
Ursula4x chapter 3 . 6/18/2010
I like the way it is clear that Neal will protect Moz and Kate to the end.
Wondo chapter 2 . 6/17/2010
We have so few stories set in the early years - please continue.
peppe1951 chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
please continue...I would like to read the rest of the conversation...
Enfleurage chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
I agree with the other reviewer about different POVs. It's great to switch POVs to go to a scene where only Neal is in it and thus the scene has to be from his perspective, or only Peter, ditto, but writing the same scene from different POVs is kind of a fanfiction thing, but not a good one.

But I have a question. If Peter arrested Neal, how is it that they are introducing themselves in the interrogation room?
madmedjenna chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
I defenitly like it, please continue. there arent many fics starting at the "beginning" of the story. Ill keep reading for sure
10EE6 chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
I really liked it! Can't wait for you to expand on the story. But, I am really not a big fan of different POV's. Just my opinion, but I don't like to hear the same story repeated multiple times. Please just continue the great start you have. Maybe follow Peter and Neal thru trial process, or even better, have Neal escape and Peter give chase!

Great story so far!
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