|Reviews for Sleeping With The Girls, Vol II: Chaos Theory|
| Mr. Good Guy chapter 31 . 10/5
I have some ideas I want to discuss with you, can I PM you? I tried to talk to you on your fimfiction blog... asking if you were still alive...
| kirosyamcha chapter 31 . 10/2
i like this story but i like the premise this story is built around, waking up around your favorite fictional characters/world. have to admit that was a good idea lol.. only wish he didnt get up half delirious with no control most times. you would think if a RoB would choose someone for this it would atleast make him keep his faculties if you know what i mean :p
| kirosyamcha chapter 16 . 9/30
hmm normally i wouldnt say this about an anime like sailor moon, but i like the way you have written them and catch their personalities, should really do a self insert in the sailor moon verse, seems like you would do it well anyways! just my openion and keep up the good work!
| Guest chapter 31 . 8/4
| Mr. Good Guy chapter 27 . 7/12
Ok, I'm a little confused here, this guy can and would eat a ham and cheese omelete, no problem, but he has problems with eating pork meat buns, because of the pork?
If it was something else, I could understand, but this seems a little far-fetched, is this something you actually have in real life, considering "Walker" is based off of you?
because if it isn't, I don't think you should use the pork itself as an excuse, maybe something else...
Still, good though, I'll keep looking for more...
| Mr. Good Guy chapter 26 . 7/12
It's spelled "Ailurophobic", not "Aluraphobic", just thought you should know, other than that, pretty good...
| Mr. Good Guy chapter 2 . 6/25
Hmm... six quintillion is not equal to sixty quadrillion, six quintillion is much more, about six thousand quadrillion...will keep looking for more, keep up the good work, though...
| Shadowpawzzz chapter 31 . 4/28
epic freaking epic I have no words how much I loved this! Read both stories in a two day marathon.
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/1
"Nanomachines", I explained in a word.
DIRECTOR: HIDEO KOJIMA
A GAME BY HIDEO KOJIMA
| Waiter chapter 31 . 3/30
I really like this story.
Letters to the God of letters,
Kilobytes to the throne kilobytes.
| 1ForThePriceOf2 chapter 31 . 3/27
Shit son, you alive? We're all worried sick!
| Mr Beaver Buttington chapter 31 . 3/28
I really don't understand the majority of this chapter.
| neosidoh13 chapter 31 . 3/12
Glad to see your still working on this. Hope to see more soon. Keep up the good work.
| UltraQuest chapter 31 . 3/10
Just finished re-reading both volumes. I definitely think the fights in the second Sailor Moon visit were dragged out a bit too long and some of these newer chapters didn't need to be as long as they are. And there is the occasional typo.
But otherwise, this is a fantastic story! Really can't wait for the next update.
| Doctor Blood chapter 31 . 2/27
I hate to bring this up, but you've got a typo in the story summary. "pressence" - "presence"