Reviews for Eat, Chuck!
Storystuff chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Aw, loved the use of calling him Chuck in here, and the last line was soooo cute! :) I don't think there's enough Charlies-not-eating kinda fics but this one was adorable! Awesome job! XD
Adri1577 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Loved it!

A perfect portrait of Charlie (yesterday morning, I think) and a great way of showing Don (finally taking a real look).

Well done!
csimesser1 chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
that was great loved it
Dragnfly Net chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
I think you need to take more time with your story, focus on making it make a bit more sense and keeping the characters perfectly in character. You certainly have potential, though.
JaneConstantine chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
I like the last line

"He might be an agent but first and foremost he would always be a big brother"

Good job!
Deanna chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
I think this is a GREAT story ! Don always looks out for Charlie, the responsibility of being the older brother. I could actually see this happening in an episode. Remember in the episode, "The Fifth Man", when Amita asked Charlie, "When was the last time you slept?"...Charlie responded with,

"Sleep is not a priority!" or later in the same episode when

Amita said to Charlie, "You need your rest."...Charlie replied,

"I need to catch this guy." Charlie will set aside things that

are necessary to HIS health, when his genius takes control.

Anyway, Thanks for this story...Keep up the GREAT work !
PattyB chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
And Don is definitely a good big brother.

I liked the story and the thought behind it. Good job!
Sonya chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Since when is Charlie's diet Don's responsibilitie? And not to be rude but, well, Charlie sure doesn't look like he misses many meals. Or can't afford to miss one or two.