Reviews for The Darkness of Konoha
Wolfone10 chapter 15 . 1/11
Naruto would have been a better match up for team 8. Of course I ALWAYS think naruto would have been a better match up for team 8.. (he MARRIES HINATA for christs' sake). but personality wise team 8 is the better fit (if the hokage haden't been sniffing glue he would have noticed)
Wolfone10 chapter 12 . 1/9
Do you remember what you wrote about that nurses' thoughts? Are you telling me she was better taught then the ENTIRE Inzuka clan? "Do not go poking something that can kill you with a thought". Except in this case THEY KNOW Naruto can kill them all! So TRYING to take him out and go against the hokage just gives him INCENTIVE to let nartuo (and the darkness) GO NUTS on the entire clan for flouting his orders.. Maybe if he gave Naruto the "green light" to kill "half" the clan? Just to MAKE A POINT!
kamenheroHEISEI chapter 11 . 10/5/2014
I'm done naruto a bitch
The darkness is LITERALLY telling him up straight his failings and weakness as well as ripping away his delusion but he still choosing to shrug it off
3-2-1-Z3R0 chapter 15 . 5/31/2014
I don't know if this was intentional or not, but you have spelled Kushina's name wrong every time you'v written it. Just saying, it get's kind of annoying to me. Good story though, once you get past all the grammatical and spelling errors.
DarkDan1100 chapter 20 . 4/28/2014
I like this story, you're doing great and I like the writing style. Can't wait to read more
mythics101 chapter 20 . 12/23/2013
I don't know if your still active but if you are and reading this, then I beg of you to please continue this story. The story is great and the character's personalities are awesome, like the darkness I feel like you got the Darkness's personality down pretty good. Anyways, I really hope you will continue to write this story.
andrewilliams268 chapter 20 . 8/15/2013
you must continue its so epic
TheNumber13 chapter 20 . 6/18/2013
I love this story
Guest chapter 20 . 5/16/2013
When will naruto learn how to manipulate his darkness armor in order to fly and Shapeshifting?
Guardianking1992 chapter 2 . 5/14/2013
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Guest chapter 20 . 4/29/2013
The darklings are so funny!
Wonder how the rest in
this arc are going act :)
sianzz chapter 20 . 4/28/2013
love the concept... hated naruto's character though... he just seem to be so whiny... moment of brilliance but still so freaking whiny... but loved the story... hope you keep up the good work... cant wait for naruto's first slaughter...
Demoness6661 chapter 20 . 4/18/2013
hahaha lol please update soon
JKing45 chapter 20 . 2/16/2013
Freaking hilarious
Syynex chapter 20 . 2/13/2013
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