Reviews for My Firstborn
NekoFlowers chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
OMG, this wass sooooo great. Totally loved it. Its sooo sad. But its sooo strong. PERFECT!
Gangsta Smurfette chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
It was powerful. But often I found myslef thinking about Moses. Surely he knew that was his nephew his adoptive brother was morning for, and he must've felt the regret for his brother. All I say is, Rameses not only stabbed himslef in the chest, but did the same with Moses.
Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
good story
HockeyKid6622 chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
wow! That was amazing! You really know how to write a poem. Very powerful words! Excellent job! Keep on writing!
roxypony chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Smokin hot! I watched this movie in class the other day and it made me wanna check out the fandom glad i did! Great work. Beeautifullyy written! I'g glad someone did a POV for this scene.

Mistress Maradure chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Wow. Good but tense ya know?
chrissynoel chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
soooooo beautiful! I absolutly loved it!
ViCtOrIoUsGaL41822 chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Wow, this is touching. You really got into Ramisi's head (not quite sure how to spell his name)
Shujil chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
That was quite poetic, and very beautiful.