|Reviews for Almost Regrets|
| ashray4 chapter 6 . 3/8
Please update soon
| ashray4 chapter 3 . 3/8
Awww love this
| ashray4 chapter 2 . 3/8
| ashray4 chapter 1 . 3/8
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
| yyyyyyyyyy chapter 6 . 8/10/2013
ii wish u would rite more luvd it :) y did u stop?
| SamyJo chapter 6 . 3/9/2013
Have you...well, have you read the second book? Or the 1st one more than once for that matter? The idea of this is really cute, but there's a lot that screwy with it. First off, Quince isn't THAT much of a butt to Lily, especially after they get together, and his moment of arrogance are playful...And Lily? She's DEFINITELY not that impatient or snippy with Quince. Or even that make-out-y. And she would certainly never say "ass". That child is way too innocent for all of that. And more sea-puns are definitely needed. Aunt Rachel is especially more irritable and impatient in here than she actually is.
Niw for technicalities: In the book, it references Quince's job quite a few times; he works in the lumber yard. You also wrote Lily turning into a mermaid as soon as she made contact with the water, which is not accurate because she consciously shifts forms, even able to make a finkini to replace her shorts. Which brims up the bikini top, because she hates those. The least I've ever read her wear was a tanktop (though this detail in your story isn't really a big deal, I just couldn't help bribing it up). Now, Quince's gills on his neck? Also off because the 1st book mentions them growing inside the mouth, I believe on the roof of it (though I'm not so solid on this particular, I just know it's within the body somewhere before the water is swallowed. The last thing is about his fin color: though he doesn't ever get them (at least not so far - I haven't read the third book yetso I don't know where that's going to go), at the end of the second it has him with a black mermark on him, implying his fins would therefore be black.
Okay. *deep breath* I know thatseemed like an attack, but I just want to azure you that it wasn't in any way meant to be, I just wanted to clear those things up. I think you could certainly do a lot with this story should you decide to continue, but hopefully these things will help you out in the future, should you decide to. :)
| Mistical Hearts chapter 6 . 1/12/2013
Ok, I am actually new to this website and I really don't know how any of this stuff really works so, I really would like to know how to get to your profile to do the poll (the one you mentioned the last chapter) for the fin colors and stuff like that.
| Mistical Hearts chapter 3 . 1/12/2013
Lol, I would be totally surprised if you put a hotel in the next chapters. I don't know what to say thought other than I would tell you when I get an idea and keep posting!
| Mistical Hearts chapter 2 . 1/12/2013
Do it! Lol, I really liked the motorcycle one though! XP That was pretty funny. But in all seriousness, add more chapters!
| Mistical Hearts chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Lol, hey! This is really really good! I can just think about what you could add to this but, I haven't read the book in awhile so I don't really remember like what grade she was in or how old she is (other than she is younger than 18, i think...?). I really want to know more! So, please please please! Lol I kinda sound desperate but its really good so its worth it (kinda :P).
| Lily chapter 6 . 12/4/2012
I like it so far! Keep writing! :D
| Artemis west chapter 6 . 11/21/2012
You haven't updated in a long time and it was so good plz update
| Lorane chapter 6 . 10/20/2012
| greenlem chapter 6 . 10/1/2012