Reviews for An Alternate Ending
Hero Dean chapter 15 . 1/5/2014
WAIT HOW DID HER HEART START BEATING AGAIN AND HOW DID HER EYES TURN BROWN WHEN SHE A VAMPIRE THIS TELL ME THIS NOT THE END
JoJoLutz chapter 15 . 9/21/2012
such a good story:)Congrats:)
nbrian72 chapter 15 . 3/11/2012
lovely story will there be a sequal?
JessieJess26 chapter 15 . 6/8/2011
Loved the story! Such a beautiful ending! You are an amazingly gifted writer!
JessieJess26 chapter 11 . 6/8/2011
I cannot deny! I loved this chapter...especially when Jake says "Mine". I love his animal side! :)
LibraGirl12 chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
Great story, really liked reading it!
Storyluver101 chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
i like it!
teamjacob1982 chapter 15 . 8/11/2010
fabulous story, i was rocked by the whole thing, thank you
betweentheloins chapter 15 . 7/8/2010
Just out of curiosity, did you get any inspiration from Montana Sky by Nora Roberts?
MynamesBresosuckit chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Oh mommy dearest i may not have gotten to read the whole thing because of the innapropriate scenes in your book but so far it was OK i just now figured out how to write things so im testing my skill because i rock :)
Samarus chapter 15 . 7/6/2010
I like the story a lot. Wasn't quite sure what to expect when I started reading it but well done. I like how you changed Edward's character from the book but not so much that he wasn't Edward at all.I also like how you expanded Bella and Jacob's characters as well as Cullens. I think a sequel is a great idea and look forward to seeing or should I say reading it!
mzmanda chapter 15 . 7/1/2010
I loved it! I like Jake growling 'mine' HOTT!
mzmanda chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
I have been looking for a story like this!
HadesMaiden chapter 15 . 6/27/2010
i love this story. i dont want it to end. i think u should do a sequal.
tainaprq chapter 15 . 6/27/2010
LOL I loved it
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