Reviews for Check It Out
XXXSonnyXXX chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
it was good, it made me so damn wet
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
Best fanfic ever! I loved it!
Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Good smut, nicely done.
Red X aka Redhood chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
check it out. u left me wanting more again lol great story
LenoraWinsdale chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
I do love a good smut story, especially when it has a bit of story to it. Glad to see the "Check It Out" skit getting some attention since the whole show, Sonny and Tawni's relationship screams lesbianism.
Cain chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Alright, this one is even better than the other one. And there's a 3rd I'm going to have to go read now too! This fic is really just too hot for words!
PieceOfLime chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
New Wave Manchild chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
Wow, it just ended, just like that. Anyway, good story, I feel pretty dirty just reading this ;). Oh and I'm a guy. Good Job.

-The Cullens of Death Metal
WyldCard4 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
OK, I recently started watching Sonny with a Chance. So far I hate Sonny (despite awesome femslash indications) and everything about So Random except for Tawnie, who is awesome. Chad Dylan Cooper is also awesome.

There was so much of an undercurrent of femslash in that episode (Sonny even called Tawnie pretty) that I am interested in how this worked out in your fic.

Okay, so it was a sex fic. I guess I shouldn't be surprised...

(Sonny sucked her tummy in and held her breath as the tip of a pink tongue darted into her navel.)

It is really strange to remember that you have grown children. It is stranger to realize that there are grown people whose mother wrote those words.

May I say it? Ma'am, you are mind warpingly awesome.

Also this seems pretty in character, more so than 80% of your fics. Sonny seems to like girls almost as soon as we meet her, and Tawnie is about as close as Disney allows to being obviously sexually promiscuous. I think this was a good couple choice.

On a personal note I am not attracted to Demi Lovato at all, which weakens my personal enjoyment of the fic. Something about her acting personality and maybe appearance just doesn't seem appealing. Her face seems almost boyish to me. This is rather personal, and I'm probably in the minority opinion of the people reading explicate Sonny with a Chance femslash.

I think I just realized how awesome erotica is.
LBF chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
Nice story. Like how you have them doing that "Check it out" skit.
gagafanatic chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
i loved it!
ScaryMiley chapter 1 . 6/16/2010

I love the "check it out girls"! in french, it is even more... subjective, the translation (in shops) for "check it out" is something like "take that" so I'm glad to read about this part

anyway, I'm repeating myself but I love your stories.

xspashleyx chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Oh wow. I loved that version of Sonny more than the actual show. :) 10/10
WhenYouKissedHer chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
yay :) *claps*
HeyIt'sME2610 chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
Ha, weird, but i loved it. that sounds wrong lol