Reviews for Adventure City
george's firework chapter 3 . 7/31/2010
Another good chapter but now I'm gonna do a bit of CC, so be prepared.

To be honest, you use exclamation marks a little too much, sometimes it's kind of like you're laughing at your own joke.

So maybe use less exclamation marks :)

But otherwise it's really good and I can't wait for more :)
george's firework chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Twas indeed odd...

Nice starting chapter :)