Reviews for Distracted
mrsvixter chapter 36 . 5/17/2012
fab as usual glad your back updating rl is shit sometimes love this fict looking forward to next chapter
Nameless001 chapter 36 . 5/17/2012
Nice chapter! I've waited for it for too long!I'm sorry to hear about your great grandmother :(
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 36 . 5/16/2012
You know I voted for you, bb! I hope you win, too!

Your humility is commendable, but sweetie, let's face it...

there's a REASON I went all fan girl on you! LOL *rolls eyes*

You deserve the nomination, and while I can't claim to have

given it, I am certainly glad that someone did!

It was most DEFINITELY worth the wait! Even if I did have to

go back about 3 chapters and remind myself where we are! LOL

Flove you, hon!
princess07890 chapter 36 . 5/16/2012
Oh wow, that was amazing :) Loved it!
prettymomma128 chapter 36 . 5/16/2012
Great job. Thanks for the update. I hope that everything in your life gets better and you're able to write more because you do a great job. :)
xoitsme848ox chapter 36 . 5/16/2012
Yay you updated! Cute chapter
teambellaedward chapter 36 . 5/16/2012
Robstenvampgirl chapter 36 . 5/16/2012
I completely loved it!

Please please update soon!
edluver09 chapter 36 . 5/16/2012
I like Blake's poetry. A lot. I think this was a pretty awesome update!
cbzoo chapter 35 . 5/15/2012
before I start this, do you plan on finishing it?
Scarlett chapter 35 . 5/12/2012
I just can't get enough of this story, pure awesomeness! I really hope you'll finish this, it's always that the best stories aren't finished :c
Iersseltje chapter 35 . 5/9/2012
Read straight through this fic. Looking forward to your nest update.
KimiD chapter 11 . 5/2/2012
A bit of a panic attack there for a minute for Edward... fighting with himself, I think he's almost as big a mess as Bella is right now~! At least he's finally starting to man up to his mistakes, that's progress... owning his part of the dilemma. That's a step in the right direction, growing up somewhat.

Bella did what she would do with Em, sidling up to him when she's scared... I was thinking, don't you dare be a coward and leave her again to fend for herself, you promised you were there for her... then he got his head on straight, he was actually kind of cute, running around like chicken with its head cut off, lol. He made the right decision... he stayed, she needs him AND he admitted he was wrong, owned up to his mistakes to her face...

Great Writing,.,.
KimiD chapter 10 . 5/2/2012
He sure seems to have such a low opinion of Bella, why does he even bother... He assumed the worst about her, debasing her with his words and actions. Hypocrite, he says about accusing her about tyler and he did the same, as friends, but she can't, Asswipe... acts like its all Her fault, he's the experienced adult in this situation. She's guiless never been anything but herself... He's acting out because of His guilty conscience for messing with a student in the first place, Knowing it was wrong, where are His ethics as a teacher... How was he hurt? By his own assumptions? Stupid... he was the cause of all the argument in the first place with his misplaced jealousy, accusing her on the beach and by what he 'thought' he saw at the party, this was all on him...

I liked the way you turned the part in the movie where he's revealing himself to her, the verbage, and applying it in your story when he's trying to find out what's wrong... "I'm here, trust me" Nicely Done... See again, I don't know if I was Bella I could forgive him~ 2 things, 1) he assumed that she was effing that guy and 2) he did not even try to fight for her when he saw them together, she was guilty without so much as an explanation, he saw how much she was drinking and how drunk she was when he was watching her behind the crowd... Oh yeah, he's love with Bella, he treats her and all but accuses her of being a whore/slut but what a revelation, he loves her... Bite Me Big Boy... you need to grovel for redemption... Just Sayin'

Now Let me tell you how I Really feel, LOL

Actually, it's great writing when you can get me all riled up and yelling at Edward, LOL He's just such an idiot~! Nuff Said
KimiD chapter 8 . 5/2/2012
Uh Oh, me thinks there's trouble in the ranks... AN older Jake, nice twist...

Sounds to me like a Jealousward has reared his ugly head~ I think he was a bit out of line with his attitude, cuz he sure has not declared himself to her and there is nothing said about being exclusive... or that he wants more than just f*** buddies. She's 18... how old is he? he was the one who started it... And just about Now, he is regretting Everything he said. She told him they were just friends. My granddaughter when to her high school prom with a guy friend, only friends and that was okay... Bad Mr Cullen, Bad~!
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