|Reviews for From The Ashes|
| elledolittle chapter 23 . 1/24
Finally a sequel that is complete! There are so many good stories out there on with sequels that get dropped at interesting junctures. So thank you for keeping it up till the end. I enjoyed it thoroughly. I am so glad you ventured outside the Twilight universe. I was a little worried when Broken Doll was categorized "Angst" but thankfully the self-loathing and flood of tears didn't last long.
However, I suggest an epilogue(s) might be helpful because a few questions still remain: (1) What will become of the new vampire governing body? What roles will Hathor and Sekhmet play? Will Ra come out of retirement? Will the Brotherhood be formed again? (2) How will Edward get accepted by himself and other vampires in his new godly form? (3) Now that Bella has no access to Edward's venom, how will she feed herself? (4) What will be in store for Eleazar?
| bella0609 chapter 2 . 8/28/2015
Well... at least she is on her way to Denali where Eleazar is. She is bound to find out a lot more about herself. I'm finding this story to be totally awesome!
| bella0609 chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
I'm sad for Alec, but Bella still has Eleazar since the Romanians are gone as well...
Who knew Aro wasn't the snake, but it was his wife!
| BridieM chapter 4 . 3/24/2015
Wow. and on another note...poor Edward. Just WOW. My command of the English language beggars belief. :D
| BridieM chapter 3 . 3/24/2015
Yes I see what you mean. I think I'll go have a shower now. ;) wonderful chapter.
| BridieM chapter 2 . 3/24/2015
Fascinating. Loved it. Thanks.
| BridieM chapter 1 . 3/24/2015
Fantastic start. It holds the promise of drama, suspense and machinations. Looking forward to reading more on the lives and loves of our favourite families.
| ShellPaul chapter 23 . 1/22/2015
Hello - I have only just found this website and subsequently, this wonderful story.
I have had an intense array of emotions as I read this (sometimes at work where I would cry or laugh out loud). I was facinated by all the information and facts you've woven into this story and now added you as my favourite and really hope that you continue to write stories that enlighten our lives.
Thank You so much and I shall now search youtube for the Pyramid Code
May you have a happy, healthy and long life so you can continue to spread joy to others!
Your belated reader - ShellPaul
| mygooddog chapter 11 . 1/18/2015
Is it your author licence about how RA was less powerful than his daughter Sulcipia ( Sekhmet) or is that part of the legend?
| mygooddog chapter 4 . 1/17/2015
A cliffy really
| JustARead chapter 22 . 12/14/2014
| JustARead chapter 21 . 12/13/2014
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| JustARead chapter 18 . 12/13/2014
Hopefully he'll realize it's not Carmen
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/10/2014