Reviews for Rebuild of Fairly English Story
bluegirl chapter 5 . 6/29/2010
wow. this chapter oddly take some times to update. but it's still good nonetheless..

um... sorry if i wrong, but i don't see many changes so far... sorry again if there is but i don't realize it. i just expecting more changes, but i still really love your story

hope you update soon :)
bluegirl chapter 5 . 6/29/2010
wow. this chapter oddly take some times to update. but it's still good nonetheless..

um... sorry if i wrong, but i don't see many changes so far... sorry again if there is but i don't realize it. i just expecting more changes, but i still really love your story :)
MK chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
I like that your showing how much you developed as a author. I'm actually proud of you.
Damon Maddox on Facebook chapter 2 . 6/25/2010
"Buurnnnn Myyyyy Dreeaad…"

Damn, this was a pretty damn awesome song. Mental note, play this when I'm on my deathbed.

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... Orly? O_O

Thanks for coming back with more, even if it was just to "Rebuild" the story. I was actually hoping for a good couple of chapters where you somehow brought Minato back... maybe in "for every soul" Or maybe get him out of the seal, but send him to a couple of different SMT and Persona games. Maybe some Devil Survivor or Strange Journey, as I haven't seen any of that in the original "Fairly English Story". Whatever... Its your story, I just look forward to more chapters.

Facebook: Damon Maddox

the dood with the Prinny playing a PSP... currently playing original Persona Remake
Slicerness chapter 4 . 6/24/2010
"My name is Igor…" He told me. "I am deLighted to make, your acquaintance…"

you capitolized the L in delighted. the only grammar mistake so far.

minato seems to be even more british and witty this time around, he's funnier and he's using the word bloody more often.

i'm assuming the trickle of blood is from the scar?
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 4 . 6/21/2010
BANGAN, WHAT'S WRONG WITH MADNESS. SO ARE YOU SURE YOU'RE NOT GONNA MAKE ANY KINDS OF CHANGES? I MEAN ARE YOU NOT EVEN GONNA SHOW ALTERNATE SCENES OF WHAT YOU THOUGHT OF DOING FIRST BUT CHANGED YOUR MIND? YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Absolute Destinyzero chapter 3 . 6/21/2010
Interesting story. Interesting personality Minato has.

Keep it up!
Flux Casey chapter 3 . 6/20/2010
If some things need to change about this story for For Every Soul to make sense then fine but otherwise this rewrite just seems unnecessary.
Slicerness chapter 3 . 6/18/2010
i'm actually thankful for my bodies odd memory keeping system. i remember some thing and don't remember others. this usually means i forget entire chunks of fics rather regularly so this is a nice chance to read the story again.

nice job btw. i wasn't really looking hard but i didn't see even one grammar mistake. something that's rather hard to do.
naru-chan 92 chapter 3 . 6/18/2010
Ohhhhhhh how I missed the insanity... really, you made my day.

Even I could see the difference in the chapters, good work you've improved. ;D
Slicerness chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
for every soul?

anyway, sry i'm late, there have been quite a few updates recently. not much to say, but i am glad minato is a little more open with his insanity.
Daughter of the Darkness Flame chapter 3 . 6/17/2010
Y'know, I'm actually happy to see that you're doing an edit on Fairly English Story. :) Not that I didn't love the first one! It was awesome... but it got more awesome as it went along. It'll be interesting to see what you change as you go along. (I did notice that you decided to introduce some of the information about Minato's past now, as opposed to suddenly introducing that information when the involved characters appear. I approve. Makes things smoother this way, IMO.) Anyway, I'm loving this so far! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 3 . 6/17/2010
YOU KNOW, WHO IS IGOR ANYWAY, I MEAN REALLY. FOR SOME ODD REASON SOME OLD MAN RIDING AN ELEVATOR/LIMO JUST SUDDENLY APPEARS OUT OF NO WHERE AND IS ABLE TO FUSE HIDDEN PERSONALITIES, WHERE DO YOU GET THAT ABILITY AND/OR WHITE HAIRED SECRETARY, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Patcheresu chapter 3 . 6/17/2010
Dear Minato,

Sadly, raw tomatos makes me puke. Bacon and lettuce with a mayonaisse on top still sounds quite delicious, maybe on beget bread. Mmmmmm...sandwich...
Matt chapter 3 . 6/17/2010
I think the Inner Mind Theatre is contagious.
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