|Reviews for The Muggle and The Centaur|
| horus100 chapter 10 . 1/28
muy interesante la historia mis felicitaciones
| RandomCitizen chapter 9 . 10/16/2013
...Still not over that Morgan? And Bane still a mite pissy as ever I see.
I wonder if Ash has grown still nice. :3 It's a wonder why Firenze is so...civil from the rest.
Glad she's got a career change. Hopefully she's learned to respect "the help" after this as well.
| RandomCitizen chapter 8 . 10/16/2013
Shame on you Bane trying to "take one for the team". :p
I think humans would accept magic eventually(though there is no denying that there would be nay-sayers and Neo Witch Trial reenactments) and It might've been best if there were no Statute of Secrecy in the first place before our tech got so far, oh well.
Man I would TOTALLY accidentally pull a feather, or let go...I've got stick arms... 'Xl
Ooh, two more chapters...ominous.
| RandomCitizen chapter 7 . 10/16/2013
Ah so that Agon-what's his face is the peacock type? Tolerable I guess. Those three brothers definitly gave off a Three Stooges/Huey, Duey, and Louis type vibe though or somethin'.
It's prolly that git BANE. Blech, can't stand the Human be not being forlorn. He's surely not happy with all Firenze's "my lady" stuff.
And stop callin' her Mare/Breeder/Not her name! ESPECIALLY WENCH! Gosh that term is annoying... DX' Well only a couple chaps left, she may be fine... :l
| RandomCitizen chapter 6 . 10/16/2013
Yeesh. That was descriptive. No wonder they got kicked out. I mean I'm all for culture differences, but I draw the line once it's at the expense of others. (and I REALLY doubt the full effectiveness of tree sap water) Well that's marginally better Magorian, though I know Bane wouldn't care to try( and her guard and the other A name guy has no chance), it
she's a means to an end for him.(and many others)
It's prolly best she don't sleep to soon. the memory won't be as fresh then so less chance of nightmares. At least I heard that somewhere about traumatic events. Guess she better be prepared for some posturing tomorrow... Sheesh at least if they were half bird(not harpy) they would try to impress her at first. Hm, I wonder if Fauns have beein in a similar perdicament as them, after all they were not too different(and were more ass-like than horses being goats) with their wild drives. Even if I think of the nice Faun fron Narnia a lot.
| betzen84 chapter 10 . 10/16/2013
GREAT story.. love to seing the World of Harry potter from a different side
| RandomCitizen chapter 5 . 10/16/2013
Now she's just being unfair to Firenze, though I definitely don't wish to be in her perdicament.
Very brutal, honestly you can tell they are GREEK Mythical Beasts that's for sure.(as in the Gods not the actual Greeks 'XP) Centaurs are intellectual but very wild I remember hearing.
Yah know, with attitudes like these it makes me wonder how their ACTUAL Breeders feel about this system and treatment.(likely fine from being raised to it and I'm sure it's not as bad sense they aren't Human)
The leader M-guy is a dummy, no way she'll get used to them now, it'd take some serious levels of Stockholm doses for that, and only Firenzes being decent enough.
Aw, now I wonder of Ash being like that...hopefully he'll being happiness for manny in fair ways.
| RandomCitizen chapter 4 . 10/16/2013
That leader guy is bugging me now...Bane always did of course.("hey I hate all Humans but if we keep this one there's free kids AND I can make it miserable, a win-win!" That's what he's thinking. :p)
Poor guy...yah know Rebecca, when you demand someone what they are doing wait for them to answer. 'XP
| RandomCitizen chapter 3 . 10/16/2013
Arguing over first dibs honestly...isolation has surely taken a hit at their manners hasn't it? (I suppose it's why you never see witches wearing pants under their robes... 'XP)
The Syfaph guy seems an alright sort.
Aw no... I never really think it appropriate to lie and mislead children like that...things like that stick to them. Hopefully no one makes a fuss about her escape attempts.(with no food, water, idea where she's going, and with a bunch of predators in her way)
PS. Yeah, well screw you Bane(I can't help but think of the Batman villain)! (though I'm sure whatever reasons he has make a minimal amounts of sense...they always do for "Humans Are the Bane(ha) of Everything" side.
| RandomCitizen chapter 2 . 10/16/2013
Welp. Looks like Karma is getting ready to give Miss Brat a punch in the crotch. (in more ways than one...)
...Sorry that was in real poor taste. :P
| NotreDame chapter 10 . 9/13/2013
I'll read it, too!
Nice epilogue. Dumbledore and Umbridge are very in-character. You got Dumbledore's wise side very well. I'm looking forward to read more!
| NotreDame chapter 8 . 9/12/2013
OK, either Rebecca is very brave or she is clueless. Does she know that sucking out poison can be very dangerous?
Firenze saving Rebecca from Bane was a nice twist. I love their interactions and I love the hippogriff at the end, too (like in the book). It must have been a bit of a shock for Rebecca! Well, at least he didn't suggest her to ride a thestral... ;)
Great end. I love character development!
| NotreDame chapter 7 . 9/11/2013
It's nice to see Hagrid again. I can easily imagine him agreeing about the clothes! I like Luna being mentioned, too.
The three young centaurs trying to get Rebecca's attention somehow remind me of the episode "Turf" in Gargoyles. Was it intentional?
"It reminded her of when she went to Miami Beach, and all the surfer boys flirted with her, showing off their muscles and surfing skills." I've seen something like that, too. *sigh* The portraying of the Centaurs is realistic, it reminds me of some guys I met.
Rebecca's choice at the end is sad but... nice. It's a nice touch, I could easily see her reacting this way.
| NotreDame chapter 6 . 9/10/2013
great chapter. Rape or attempted rape is something very difficult to write about and some authors write as thought it was no big deal (which is insulting to people who actually had to deal with it). You got Rebecca's feelings and reactions very well. I can't help admiring Rebecca on this one: it was well thought!
| NotreDame chapter 5 . 9/9/2013
Hello, great installment!
Oh dear. So the concept of rape doesn't exist among Centaurs. They don't even use those horrible justifications like "she had a part of responsibility because she was wearing a short skirt/had drunk some alcohol/it was her boyfriend/she was not a virgin already/now those poor boys have a bad reputation". Poor Rebecca...
Hey, the foal is really adorable!
I'm surprised by this sentence: "Hades, they truly believed that what was planned for her was an honour!" Do Centaurs believe in Greek gods? But it's a nice idea as the god Hades didn't court his wife.
I'm looking forward to read more from you. :)