Reviews for Leave Out All The Rest
ra7matigorti2 chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
damn my shabbat shalom feels are killing me ! and the memories were so sweet
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Poor, Zeeva

Her father is dead. Yay (: I love it when people die so cool.
steampunk-archer chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Aw, loved this
SSAPrentiss chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Great story!

And I love the Linkin Park song! Omg. Best. Song. Ever!
rubiesandrain chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
AW! I love it! I love when people, after all the bad he's done, potray Eli as a mostly good person. :)
DefinedGravity chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
thank you, finally someone who realizes that Eli David might be a monster but tha he has also done some good things, and that, no matter what he has done, he still remains family,

you're a very good writer, :)

can't wait to read any of your other stories.
meb chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
I think you bring up a very good point with this story. Eli has been written very ... one dimensional. As if he's nothing but evil. Ziva would not have a sense of compassion (ex. Zayda, Lee's sister, the rape victim, etc) or wanting to work to put the bad guys away if she had not had some good experiences growing up. Good story.
zats chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Even if I don't like Eli, he had to have some good qualities at sometime. Would not mind if you continue it.