Reviews for With Arms Wide Open
blondie1421 chapter 2 . 3/18/2011
really good. update soon!
Edwards squeaky chew toy chapter 2 . 8/10/2010
Good story cant wait to read more.
emm5683 chapter 2 . 8/10/2010
and the darkward appears. lol. i like this story! update soon!
golden-perception chapter 2 . 8/10/2010
Really good! Update asap!
emm5683 chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
yes i agree darkward stories are entrancing, if thats even a word, but you get my point :)

this is good! update soon :)
TheLoveOfHate chapter 2 . 6/17/2010
This ias an awesome chapter!

Update as soon as you can!

-The love of hate
andrea-af91 chapter 2 . 6/17/2010
WOW! This story looks really promising!

Please update soon :)
A is for Angel chapter 2 . 6/17/2010
cant wait for more:)
yahoo-chloe chapter 2 . 6/17/2010
A couple of little things... you switch tenses in the first chapter ("It's not everyday complete strangers offer things like that", from previous past tense) which affects the flow a little. And you don't generally say you're "very" elated- elation is a strong enough emotion, putting another descriptor in front of it just sounds a bit awkward. Otherwise, I think your writing has some real promise- I loved how, when Edward was looking at her 'library', Bella thinks "My life might as well be a book"- it really suited her sense of humour, I think, and sums up how he's just looking directly into her life. Anyway, keep it up! Chloe
yhan29 chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
can't wait for the next chapter!
GM chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Nice Concept.
TheLoveOfHate chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
I love it, update as soon as you can.

-The love of hate
Team-Edward-Forever95 chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
sounds cool :)