Reviews for Birthday Celebration
PR Stella 926 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Great story. Really loved it
smut1956 chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Proof again that marriage can be fun and sexy as can actually putting a couple together, something TPTB in canon never got.

But hey, you get it and we get to enjoy the way you pull together all the sexy and sweet for this. Great from start to finish.

Thanks for sharing this.

T.
Monk'ichii chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
So funny hahah with the toilet brush xD "They are so dead" I can't stop laughing !

Aah sorry I'm so in late, happy birthday to you D Hope you had a lot of presents !

Continue to write fics like that, it is so fun :) You 'Smack' the world, yeah !
CreATiveGenIuS18 chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Hehe she attacked him lmao oh Happy Belated B'day who u njoyed it ..i really like this one it deffinitely kept me hoping for Smacked ttyl

xoxo crazy hot

Leah
csi-ncis chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
or a more memorable one! lol that was hilarious.
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Amazing story! I really enjoyed it! Very cute!
csiAngel chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
This is fantabulous :) I love Danny & Flack in the background of the phone conversation! And you did an excellent description of the suspense as Stella was sneaking about hiding from her intruder. And Mac is sooo adorable, surprising her. This is a great birthday fic :) Thoroughly enjoyed it :D
lily moonlight chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
*Happy sighs* Happy Birthday to you also! Thank you for posting this, hooray! I'm so glad you did :D It deserves to be shared and read, it's such a great story, very sweet, very funny, and very romantic, I love it! Many thanks for the kind note at the top as well! Thank you to you for the encouragement and guidance also, you're a great friend. This is such a good story, and it never fails to bring a big grin to my face, no matter how many times I read it! It's fabulous. I love how you describe a scene so Ic an always picture it and believe in it and the characters - they're always real and always in character. It's Stella exactly with the phone held between her ear and shoulder and hunting through her closet for her dress. I love the image of Mac surrounded by Danny and Flack, and them guffawing (that's such a good word, by the way, it always makes me laugh by itself!) Great description of the tension, without any lack of humour, as Stella prepares to defend herself against the intruder, and it's cool that you kept it secret what she'd actually picked up. Oh poor Mac, but oh how I laughed :D I adore the ending of this, it's super wonderful! Fabulous line from Mac that it's not the dress he loves, oh, and he brought cake as well! What more could a girl want? :D Brilliant! Thank you :D
SMackedFan chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Now THATS a birthday party ;P lol! I'm gonna ask for Mac this year on my bday ;)

Anyway, this was totally cute, and I love that Stella attacked him with a toilet brush! Lol!

Thanks for the smiles to start off my day :) Hope u had a great bday yesterday :)
MARNIC chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Nice one shot, thanks!
afrozenheart412 chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Okay, first you nearly killed me with choking at the end! WOW! Not only does the black eye going to be a lesson on never surprise Stella while relaxing and to make sure all of the toilet brushes are locked away. Not only has this been a romantic story but so full of love and laughter. Mac was wonderful in trying to surprise her. While I do feel sorry for his black eye, he did the right thing in bringing chocolate cake. I guess he gets to feast on two of his favorite things. ;D

Favorite lines

"Yeah, you will," she replied lightly, though she was disappointed that their celebration would have to be postponed. "Things happen, Mac," she continued in a more serious tone. "That's the job." A pause. "See you when you get home."

"Happy birthday, honey. I love you."

In the background, Stella heard the unmistakable snickers from Danny and Flack. Boys!

"Tell them to mind their own business," she grinned. "Love you. Call if you need me."

"I'm always going to need you."

The snickers escalated into full-blown howls of laughter, and she was almost positive that the 'thud' meant her husband had thrown something at their friends…"

"I wanted to surprise you," he replied, rubbing his forehead where he'd been whacked. "Guess the surprise is on me."

"I'm so sorry, honey," she said, an apologetic look on her face. "But you really should have called."

"Won't make that mistake again," he half-chuckled, his fingers still running over the wound. "What the hell did you hit me with, anyway?"

Sheepishly, she showed him the weapon.

"A toilet brush?" he questioned, amused. "Planning on cleaning my clock?"

"She studied his wound. "I must've hit you really hard. Does it hurt?"

"Yeah, but it'd feel better if you'd kiss it," he smirked.

She grinned and rolled her eyes. "First of all, you're not five, and second, there's no way I'm kissing you until you've washed your face."

"But you thumped me with the toilet brush."

"Which wouldn't have happened if you'd called," she pointed out as she placed the weapon/cleaning implement back in the closet, trading it for a washcloth."

"I was planning on wearing that black dress."

His mouth formed an 'O,' and his eyes slid over her appreciatively, affectionately. "It's very beautiful but it's not the dress I love," he said sincerely, noticing her attire-assuming a towel could be considered attire-and the bubble bath. "What, you're celebrating without me?" he smirked, the fingers on his other hand tracing over the top edge of her towel.

"Only because I thought you wouldn't be home until later. But now that you're here…"

The towel hit the floor, quickly followed by the washcloth, and she reached for his belt buckle.

Stella couldn't have asked for a better birthday celebration."

Yummy!
Anastasia-FFBF chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
It's awesome! I really like it and especially the part about the phone call and Danny and Flack!

You put a huge smile on my face! Yay!
Kat's in the cradle chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
"Planning on cleaning my clock?" That line literally had me laughing out loud for an embarrassingly long time. ]
Oneturtledove chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
Danny and Flack laughing in the background just made my night. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
piper maru duchovny chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
I love this

Black dresses hittin' the floor

oh hey, I should finish that.

Anyways.

Towels hitting the floor is equally fun.

Loved it.

Love you.

:)

Love,

Me.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAREST.