Ch 4 That Lance Beetle Spear could be deadlier with oone detail . If it expands and the beetles crawl in the wound or expand thinely when are in millimetres from the target. .

awesome.

i see nothing special about hinata she's this is good

this is interesting hurry with more chapters.

hmm how interesting very good story.

Would love to see this continued.

was originally hesitant about reading this but I have to admit it was really well written though I am wondering if you are ever going to continue this?

This is cool! Never played the game you've crossed Naruto with here (or seen/read it either), but this is very interesting! Are you still writing? Your stories haven't been updated in a while.

'Unique', that's the first word that falls into my head when reading this story, followed immedietly by 'Great'. Hope to hear more from this.

Add Kite, Black Rose, Tsukasa, Haseo, Ovan, and Tri Edge/Azure Kite.

Huh, seems like Naruto played a minor part in the Wave mission, but that's ok, was still pretty damn good.

I wonder what Naruto thought of Haku. Both boys commonly mistaken for girls.

Nice jutsu's. Found it awesome that Ino and Naruto get along so well.

Marvelous, there are so very very few .hack Naruto fics, and even fewer that work so well. I like how you had him take after Kushina, she is so much better than Minato.

I hope you continue the story it was an awesome read so far. I feel that Naruto can whoop his opponents ass soundly.