|Reviews for Shadowclan's Indefitable Outcome|
| dickhead chapter 19 . 1/9
| Eclipsed night Umbreon chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
I hope there is a sequel to this!
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/17/2016
What about GWAAAN?
| Cela08 chapter 23 . 3/17/2016
A long time ago, (AKA 2014) I had been deep in my Warrior Cats phase, and as a lover of crossovers, I was hunting down any interesting ones that I could. Hence, stumbling across this story. I read it all in one day, and eventually near-forgot it. The only few half collected memories I had were about it being extremely tragic but well-written.
But knowing my standards at the time, I felt as though maybe I would be wrong. Maybe it was just a train-wreck that I enjoyed with a sour note? After all, it was under the categories of "Adventure/Humor". I re-read it, thinking it couldn't have been as heartrending and dark as I remember.
It was twice that.
From the heavy atmosphere of worry that permeates most of the story as things fall apart, to the sense of hopelessness which grows stronger and stronger as the story nears its conclusion, to the absolute terror of... well, what happened to Russetfur - not gonna spoil that point, to the ending that builds up hope only to remind you of something horrible that shatters all of that in an instant...
It's a beautifully written story, which is quite unexpected for a crossover between Warrior Cats and Dragon Ball Z. Goku and Vegeta were incredibly in-character, though I can't say much for the Warriors because I admittedly haven't read the books in ages. The descriptive scenes are very well done, whether they be dark or beautiful, as are the fight scenes. (gosh, I wish I could pull off fight scenes like you do...)
But, with all that said, this story leaves me with one burning question... WHY in the name of ALL THAT IS HOLY is this fanfic marked as "Humor"?!
| nikki.h1201 chapter 23 . 12/30/2014
:cries for 35040 hours: (4 years)
AHHH I EXPECTED A HAPPY ENDING D:
| nikki.h1201 chapter 15 . 12/30/2014
Why did Pinepaw die?
She is a warrior later. Unless she is somehow alive...
I might be scared to read more chapters O.O
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/18/2014
I wonder what dovepaw/dovewing or brambleclaw/bramblestar
Would say if they knew tigerheart and tawnypelt could summon lighting and fly. That would be funny.
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/18/2014
At the first chapter I imagined TawnyX Goku for some reason
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
Holy shit dragon ball z and warriors crossover. I didn't see it coming.
| NebulaXYZ chapter 23 . 6/3/2013
Well this wasn't what I was expecting. But still, great job
| Asteroth of the dark world chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Awesome story im sad its over
| CharmedPluto chapter 23 . 5/25/2013
As soon as Vegeta died I shrugged and figured you'd do StarClan sorta like Otherworld the anime but nope, just freaking kill everything.
Blackstar...you're an idiot my friend.
I was also half expecting Goku or Gohan (or both) to show up having mastered at least Super Sayian again and just completely wipe the floor with Buu, but nope they vanished...
I actually was okay with this, though I figured Pinepaw and the Kiaoken would've helped out a lot more. This was really good
| NebulaXYZ chapter 20 . 5/21/2013
Buu vs The Clans...oh boy
| NebulaXYZ chapter 19 . 5/21/2013
Blackstar taken over clans. I never did like him anyway...
| NebulaXYZ chapter 18 . 5/21/2013