Reviews for The Other Half That Makes Me Whole
Miller18 chapter 8 . 3/10/2015
Please update
Do'B chapter 4 . 10/20/2014
There is such a strong emphasis on trust, sharing and closeness between sisters, and brothers and how they share everything with each other, so this secret Bella has kept hidden is monstrous, bigger than Ben Hur!

I can see this actually causing a wedge between them, hopefully not a permanent one.
Do'B chapter 2 . 10/20/2014
Wonderful chap, love how close the girls are, well the entire families are very closely knitted, which still makes me wonder why Bella didn't chose to tell Edward about the pregnancy. Bella has all these wonderfully close sisters and family members to support her and Edward that they both should easily move mountains together... Edward could have still been able to study and reach his dreams...
Do'B chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
Oh my, not sure if I want to feel empathy for Bella or choke her. Bella is playing with fire and when Edward finds out he is going to explode and what of his family? I'm sure they all could have worked something out allowing for Edward to continue on with his studies...and I'm surprised that Charlie and Renee agreed to go along with Bella's hair brained idea... this is huge, epic. Will keep on reading
ms.Tee2011 chapter 8 . 6/13/2013
so what happened with her having the baby did she ever tell him and he go back . it just talked about her when they made the baby I guess but I wantna know. I've read most of your stories and love your writing. Let me know
Guest chapter 8 . 5/26/2013
Just read this story again. Will you finish it ? Thanks
dckdck422 chapter 8 . 1/2/2012
more please
chocl8lips chapter 8 . 12/4/2011
Love this story. Any plans to finish it?
jule2 chapter 8 . 11/7/2011
Great story, Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, will u finish it. I like the plot. I would love to find out how they get together? I do like you other stories. Please conitue. Thank you
Mistydeb chapter 8 . 9/28/2011
Great storey, please tell me you will finish it.
Danie86 chapter 8 . 2/19/2011
Great story. Will you be updating it anytime soon? I'd love to find out how the baby & them get everything together...
francesmama chapter 8 . 1/30/2011
can't wait for your update
berdb chapter 8 . 12/22/2010
I hope Edward didn't move on the SluTanya, while Bella has been raising his critter so he could accomplish his dream.
Shoveler chapter 8 . 10/23/2010
love the story
ADADancer chapter 8 . 10/23/2010
Great chapter.
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