Oh my god I’m so sad it ended. I’ve been reading this story non stop since a few days ago and I just couldn’t find myself to.. stop. I probably have mentioned it in my previous reviews but you’re so talented. The things you write here, how you convey emotions through Bella’s POV.. it’s beautiful. You bring up the topics of love, family, and friendship so beautifully that I wonder will there ever be another fanfic like this? I know I’m over a decade late, but I honestly don’t care, I’m so glad I stumbled upon this fic a few days ago. Not only this fic entertained me, but it has also taught me many stuffs, I think I’m gonna go in a corner and self reflect now lol. Anyways, hope you’re doing alright! Wherever you are! Thank you for writing this

I’m writing this review before I even finished the chapter; I legit cried during Bella’s conversation with her mother. That was very well and beautifully written. The way Bella imagines herself in Edward’s position before she runs to her mother to tell her that she loves her… oh I was literally shedding my tears. You are SO talented

poor Edward, my heart breaks for him. to think he was trying to talk Bella out of falling in love with him because he comes with so much baggage gahhh he honestly deserves the world, and I’m sure Bella will give it to him

I like how Bella and Edward handled the conversation, it was emotional but somehow it showed how mature they are. They probably shouldn’t be doing all that in a park lol but yeah! the sooner the better! I’m also curious about what happened with Edward, cuz I remember Bella saying he used to drive nicer cars and all.. did he somehow fall into a big debt or smth? hmm I guess I just have to continue reading hahah I’ve been reading nonstop all day! damn

YEEEEEEE I CAN’t with these two they’re so cute ahhh and (they don’t know it yet) in loveee. The way you write their first kiss is so amazing, you described everything so beautifully! You’re honestly so talented

Ah.. Bella starting to notice that Edward is handsome and “kind of sexy” is the first sign of her falling for him hahah anyway I’m so, so curious about Edward. Like yes he appears a lot in the story so far but we barely know anything about him! See this is why I love reading old, completed fics; the truth is already out there in the coming chapters, I just have to continue my binge reading lol

Oh damnnnn! I’m so happy Bella is standing up for herself; both to her mom and Edward. you go girl

I find it hard to sympathize with Bella. I get that she was not content with how her life was, and good for her that she ended it, but her constant weeping is making me a little annoyed. Like girl, obviously leaving someone after 6 years together is gonna affect you and that’s totally normal, you’ll move on. But her constant weeping is a little unbearable. And her thinking of herself as the “unsettled child” after finding out Alice was pregnant is a little dramatic. You’re 24… you still have a long way ahead of you. I feel like by that age you should know it’s never good to compare yourself to others lol but yeah.. I’m hoping we’ll see some big character development from her. Curious what’s going to unfold between her and Edward!

I'm here for my yearly re-read. I haven't written a word or read a line of fic in over a year. Just when I think the magic's gone, your words bring it all back. Hope you're well, Lisa.
Jaynie

Awesome story! I do wish there was more.

Their happiness makes my heart full.
Will,Jake be at the wedding? I have a theory that he will and
he will bring his girlfriend. He will than tell Bella how right she
was to end things between them.

Nice...

It sounds like there might have been a lot of stuff Edward could have sold to save the house.

I wondered during this story that Renee was on her way out the door, she
just didn't seem happy. Than after Charlie's speech about when they were
younger I put that thought away. During this chapter I went back to thinking
she might be out cheating, I'm glad I was wrong.

I think Renee is being really unreasonable. She should listen to her daughter,
support and give advice. After telling her how she was with Jake she still acted
like an ass. Still acted like she thought Bella belonged with him.