Reviews for We Come to Life Beneath the Stars |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, what a great story. This Edward and Bella are wonderful characters. And Renee was redeemable. I regret not reading this until now. I thought it was a story about astronomy & such. But I love it and has filed it as one of my favourites. Thank you so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, I can’t believe I hadn’t read this awesome story. Edward is a nerdy but sweet even though grumpy at times, gentleman. Bella is not a doormat. The usual players are all nice except fir Renee, which is a shame. I will proceed to read a really good story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was soooo beautiful ! Thank you so much ! It was so real, i loved the details you have put it in and the characters were amazingly well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I never know if i'm going to finish a fanfiction when i begin reading one but I wanted to say right now that you have an amazing gift with words. Wow. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely beautiful story. I loved the growth for both Edward and Bella. Everyone deserves to have that all- consumming desperate passion and deep, unshakable love. I can also relate to the conflict between mothers and daughters. Fortunately my mother is not as bad as Renee but they truly do just want the best for us. I also loved the relationship between Edward and Esme. What a beautiful commentary on relationships and the power they have over our lives and our happiness. Your writing is beautiful and thoughtful. Thank you for sharing this with the fandom. Now go publish it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved this story so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reading this for the 2nd Time and loving it even more. Edward was just beautiful. Wow I enjoyed this. Ps Emmett was adorable,, |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've just read this in one day. Love, love love it Such beautiful writing and it's now on my To Be Read Again list Thank you Sue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Etsy sweet story. Great details. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your imagery is so incredibly alluring. I was sucked into this story with your opening paragraph and your momentum carried me until the very end! Your depiction of relationships, romantic and not, was so real, honestly it's so refreshing. I think it's so easy to make Jacob and Renee the bad guys, but they're not just two dimensional people. They have backstories and fears that shape the way they make decisions and I love that you took the time to establish that! Also, I think Emmett is my favorite character here. I think he's another one that people easily throw into a general loud-and-goofy box, but you evolved him into someone so much more! Someone with equal parts fun and wisdom. I would have loved to see your characters interact with each other more, but I think it also takes a lot of strength to know when to end a story on the perfect note instead of dragging it out for nostalgia's sake. Job well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() “And I want seventy more” GOD IM GONE BUTTERFLIES x100000 |
![]() ![]() ![]() “But sometimes, it’s just so easy to fall.” DAMN |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Abraham Lincoln thing made me laugh out loud. That was awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely Thanks so much |