|Reviews for We Come to Life Beneath the Stars|
| JayNahNah chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
Wow...I read the updates quickly cause i want to know what happened then I go back & reread to understand. Why is Edward saving food, etc? Is he hard up for money? Will we get an EPOV soon? Would love to see what his issues are! Good so far!
| philadelphic chapter 2 . 7/1/2010
I am ready for ROMANCE. ;-)
| cmandal chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
This story has me fascinated...I can't wait to find out what Edward's deal is
| philadelphic chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Great start! I may have some shizz in common with this Bella. Esp. the mama thing.
| mujisan chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
Wonderful as always. I love all the imagery. The image of Bella looking over at the empty seat was particularly striking. Thanks for the update!
| ol2bob chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
hell.. forget Bella.. I'm intrigued as hell by Edward...
| Cullenosopy chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
Thanks! It should be fun figuring out what makes Weirdward tick. He certainly is all over the map.
| confettirainfall chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
I'm very curious to find out what Edward's deal is and I want Bella to be happy. I hope something develops with them soon. Great chapter ;-)
| reesessweetie chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
this chapter made me cry...
i love the little bit of interaction between edward and bella in here. it was really cute. but he takes offense at the littlest of things.. doesn't he know a joke when he hears one? like when bella was asking if he was storing up for the winter with his sandwich.. but i guess it's something he's really sensitive about. maybe there's a reason for all his ocd-ness..maybe he has diabetes or is allergic to something... i hope not. i would like for edward's quirkiness to be a result of his unique personality than for everything to be all explained by some illness...
i'm glad that for this story, you made it so that bella left jacob because she realized that with him, she doens't have the passionate romantic love that jasper and alice share. it's not easy to give up a life of certainty and stability for something that she doens't even now she'll be able to achieve.. but i'm proud of her for not settling. far too many people settle when they shouldn't..
i can't wait for the retreat. i have a feeling that edward and bella's relationship might change a little bit after that...
even though everyone at her new company seems to be really cool and friendly, i worry because bella's job right now doesn't seem like something she's passionate about doing. she said this job would only be temporary and i kind of hope so...it seems like she's doing alot of secretorial stuff, like ordering food for them and whatnot, not something more substantial... i dunno.. this job doesn't seem to challenge her...
| thewasofshall chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
I don't know why I thought Rhapsody in B would be a one time thing. You write the way you write and I feel spoiled having this whole other story on which to feast. I could probably comment with the beautiful way you write heartbreak, the heartbreaking way you write surviving, the certain way you tell a story that always seems simple until I try to understand it... but I can't really think of one thing that gets to me above all the others. Everything just works.
| jarkin33 chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
I seriously laughed out loud when you were describing the girl who she ate lunch with... hilarious.
I just love this story! You capture all the feelings and you make me feel like I'm experiencing the same things she is.
I can't wait to get Edward's story!
| devadasi7 chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
that car metaphor was incredible. seriously full of wisdom! i love emmett!
i'm just wondering what the deal is with edward...i can't seem to figure him out...
| jansails chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
I don't have a clue as to what Edward's deal with his plate is, just moe of the puzzle Bella's trying to piece together.
I'm looking forward to the retreat.
Bella's still in transition, going from two to one in her feelings & expectations.
| Lenerol chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
It takes time to rebuild after a break. This is what Bella is. It is not easy to compensate for a quarter of his life. Edward has really weird ways of behaving and Alice gives a good picture.
Thank you for this chapter
I add the original text to be better understood
Il faut du temps pour se reconstruire après une rupture. C'est ce que Bella fait. Il n'est pas facile de compenser un quart de sa vie. Edward a vraiment des façons bizarres de se comporter et Alice en donne une bonne image.
Merci pour ce chapitre
A tout bientôt
| KrisScott chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
This is such a beautifully written and moving story. I can feel her heartbreak and it reminds me of the pain of losing a relationship - even when it's the right thing to do, it's still hard.
I'm interested to know who calls Edward every day, and why he is so harsh to everyone all the time.