Reviews for Dutch Door Action
Sunny's Priceless Dream chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Sooo I guess I wasn't logged in for my last review.

I hope you were able to tell it was me...who else loves Ted's ass.

BUT ANYWAY I WANTED TO REVIEW THIS AGAIN JUST BECAUSE I CAN!

I LOVED IT!
Thee Freaking Britty chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
Like I reviewed on Sunny's story...My laptop went kaput (stories and all) and I am on my friend's computer. Fucking piece of shit. I have most of my stories on a flash drive at home somewhere...

So whenever I get a new laptop, I'll update one!

:D

Onto the review.

:)

God I wish Randy would pull his board shorts down in front of me...I'd be ALL over that. And then some. Plus, he needs to take lessons on listening. He doesn't listen worth a shit.

angryface.

Oh well. I still love the kid to death. WAIT he's not a kid :( He's THIRTY. I'm still kinda iffy on that. But it's whatevers, you know?

I liked this. It's funny. :)

3 Britty.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
THERE ARE TIMES I FIND JAY ATTRACTIVE AND I SEE WHAT KAIT SEES IN HIM.

Like when he's wearing flannel and jeans.

But all the other times, I don't understand her love.

SEXY JAY!

Kait would never ask that many questions. She'd just fuck him on the kitchen floor.

Ha, Ted has no right calling Adam fat.

BUT HIS ASS IS TO DIE FOR.

Aww Randy's jealous!

HAHAHA CHRIS!

I LOVE SLUTTY JAY. AND SEXY JAY.

BUT RETARDED JAY IS MY FAVORITE!

I LOVED THIS MACK

AND IF THIS WAS WRITTEN LIKE A SCREENPLAY IS NEEDS TO BE MADE INTO A MOVIE. I'D BUY IT.
Goldust chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
This reads like a screenplay. Too much dialogue, comparatively. You need to work on writing quality non-dialogue sections, because just reading straight dialogue is very difficult.
CrystalxShip chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
YESSSSSSS SEXY JAY

OMG SHOPPING WITH EDGE AND JERICHO?

WHO STOLE THE BUDDHA STATUE? I LOVE THAT THING

THAT HOUSE TOUR DESERVES AN OSCAR

OMG THAT FUCKING DOLL

I HOPE HE GOT RID OF THE BOWL OF ROCKS THAT HE USED FOR A CENTER PIECE

OH MY FUCKING EDGE! DO YOU REALIZE HOW I MELT WHEN HE ACTUALLY LICKS HIS LIPS? ITS LIKE HE KNOWS HES FUCKING SEXY

IM FUCKING LOVING THIS JAY

OMG THE FUCKING AWFUL SIDE SWEPT GEEK HAIR HAHA

IM A SHOWER GUY HAHAHAHAHA

AHH HE CAN FUCKING STRIP ME ALL THE FUCKING TIME THAT SNEAKY FUCK

AGAIN, JASON IS FUCKING HOTTTT

MY FAVORITE BLACK BUTTON DOWN?

HE BETTER BE SICK OF BEING THE RETARDED FRIEND I WAS ABOUT TO DUMP HIS ASS FOR DOLPH

OMG HE WANTS TO RAPE ME

RANDY NEVER WEARS PANTS

I LOVE SEXY JAYYYY

AWWWW POOR EDGE IS INSECURE ABOUT HIS WEIGHT

AHH RANDYS SIGNATURE LINE

AND THERRRRRES THE WHORE AT HIS FINEST

EWWWWWWWW I DONT LIKE THE THOUGHT OF JAY IN TRUNKS

I MEAN HE HAS GREAT LEGS BUT EWWW NO

HAHAHA HES JUST A SLUT NOW

FIRST HE SCREWS ME THEN HE SCREWS YOU ITS DUTCH DOOR ACTION

YESSSS

IN THE HOT TUB WITH A COUPLE OF COLD ONES

OMG I CANT GET ENOUGH OF SEXY JAY