|Reviews for Take Me Home|
| GreenCAT the second chapter 1 . 7/18/2015
*sad trombone plays as the porn is skipped*
| thegriffin88 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
I kept dancing around this one because there are very few yaoi pairings I support in any fandom just simply because I can't get into them. But this one was written very well and the ending was adorable. So I guess I don't mind these two so much anymore. :)
| sostrangechild chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
YOU. YEAH YOU. No, not you, sorry sir, I meant the lady RIGHT THERE. DON'T TRY TO SHY AWAY FROM ME. YEAH. THAT LADY. YOUUUU.
I like you. _ I'm glad you skipped the porn. I was looking for a more psychological story anyway. Kiriko's voice in this is puuuuuurfect. I wish I could write these characters as well as you do. Somehow, a soggy Black Jack reminds me of a stray puppy.
"Usually when you see me you want to take my head off, or stalk me. Or both."
"…Take me home?" The request was an odd one, out of the blue and startling.
"Take you home?" Kiriko echoed.
"With you." Red eyes peeked out from behind dripping bangs. "Please."
BRILLIANT. Had me giggling.
I did find a small typo, and I thought I should let you know about it. :) "How long where you standing there?" should really be "How long were you standing there?"
Anyway, looking forward to the multi-chap fic!
| Phoenixofdarkness62 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Lovely fanfic, I'm not one for a ton of yaoi but... this was an exception since it was so well written. I really enjoyed it, and really liked the ending. Great job, and I look foward to your next Black JAck fanfic. :)
| Esplandian chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Too HoYay for my taste and slightly OoC—but I guess, when in love, everyone is a bit OoC—, yet well written.
Short and sweet, and there is no need for the LEMON.
| Prince Harpy chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
That was so cute I almost needed heart surgery BADUM-CHA. Lmao. But srsly folks. I like how you referenced their affairs in the past. It so hard to find a good Jack/Kiriko fic. I need more money to buy volume eleven. Sigh. Okay, you're def on my faves list :D
| Bablet chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
I'm looking forward to the next instalment!