|Reviews for Castlevania: The Cursed Stone of Dracula|
| Tarale's Sweetie chapter 3 . 4/5/2013
I was seeking out Castlevania xovers and saw this. I read it before but i kinda got turned off because I spotted various spelling errors here and there. But it looks like you cleaned up and corrected them errors. Good. Does that mean you plan to produce an update to this? It sounds very interesting since you apparently have cameos like Aulin from Portrait of Ruin in the story.
Hope to see an update. It's been too long in my opinion.
| Ninja Master chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
That would be if Julius Belmont is in the fic. Awesome crossover!
| noodle-monster chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
interesting enough story, major drawback though is that the way you write it is confusing, and i don't mean just to those who have no idea about castlevania.
ex: you introduce harry reinhardt to us, go on and on about his looks and his school, and all of a sudden when the reader is still thinking that harry's at school (because that's basically where you placed his then current location), then bam, you have his mother interrupt him and he's in his shed.
then you have that vision thing and funeral. you don't explain shit about it. who the devil is dead? uncle max? because you made it sound like he'd died much earlier, so then who, vernon? it's only until half a page later that you tell us that vernon's dead.
further, the reader is left to puzzle out that harry is a precog apparently during the day as well (before you only briefly mentioned dreams and nightmares), and he's preparing for battle. then he get's into Petunia's car, and isn't that reference straight out of left field.
at the funeral where did the vamps come from? you only mentioned DEs and OoTPs appearing.
bad grammar here, makes the sentence confusing:
That was when Dumbledore came over the hill, and blasted the vampire back before getting whisked through the air, by an invisible rope of some kind, and landed with a soft thump by the old man. The vampire however snarled, before her eyes widen when she saw a familiar item around the boy's wrist.
sounds like dumbledore got whisked through the air after blasting the vamp.
her eyes widened. no widen.
get a beta that'll check for coherency and grammar. otherwise all this story will ever be is an interesting idea with bad implementation.
| asdrans chapter 2 . 7/6/2010
I like it. Will you update soon?
| grishmax chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
Hm... I have to say. It is an interesting... okay, VERY interesting crossover you are planning here. I would like to see more. Although, how ARE you planning this. You seem to do some homework, since I recognize the tidbit of the Demon Castle War mentioned in Aria of Sorrow.