Reviews for The Kiss
Stars and Jewels chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
This is excellent! First of all, of course, you include what really should've been included: a tender, long-overdue kiss between Jen and Kira. Also, I like how you describe that, if they had killed Kira and the Gelflings had indeed gone extinct, then the Skekses would've won, as that's a point worth observing. And you convey Jen's heartbreak with absolutely perfect description! Very well done!
Sailor Barsoom chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
Yes. Exactly right.

I guess they probably tried the kiss with the movie, and two puppets kissing had looked silly, or they were afraid that it would. But it obviously happened, and it definitely should have.
IceQueen93 chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
I love this story! You have done what i have wanted for a very long time, always loved the movie, and always longed for a book. I think I might actually write one, I have been thinking about it for a while. But Anyways great use of words and adjectives! You can feel the emotion's depth and picture everything! On a scale of one to ten i give it an 11! :)
Queen Medesa chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
Thats a beautiful story!