|Reviews for Mourning|
| Lela50310 chapter 13 . 3/12
This was certainly entertaining!
| MusicMyEscape-DemiGodSlytherin chapter 13 . 1/19
great story, really enjoyed reading it! :P
| Joey Bermuda Ketail chapter 13 . 11/28/2013
Awwwww! This is soooo cute! I love it so much! I LOVE submissive Draco! He's so adorable!
| Venus914 chapter 3 . 11/26/2013
I never understand the Slytherin reasoning that they were forced to murder, torture and rape to save their family. While i wont be cruel like Ron, i understand what he meant. It didnt matter that the Slytherins were just acting. What matters was that they hurt people. MY parents wouldnt have wanted me to save them by hurting people. They wouldnt want me to become a killer and a rapist. I have a younger sister too. I dont think i can kill anyone for her. Maybe if i have to defend her BUT NOT at the expense of other innocent people. The problem with the Slytherins is that they think its okay to murder, rape and torture to save their own skin and their family. They are all so arrogant to place others lives BELOW their own. It's their parents so it's okay. And they didnt apologize! Like i said, whether they meant it ir not, they still hurt a lot of people! Lives were lost and ruined! It wont be solved by acting as if it didnt happen or being nicer! They have to be sensitive to those people they hurt over the years! Showing their marks in full view of those who has family killed is the height of insensitivity and irresponsibility! Im not the type to blame the kids for their parents mistakes but in this case, its different. Those Slytherins are not innocent and participated in years if bullying and even maybe killing, torturing and raping during Death Eater sessions. So like Ron, because they were guilty in my eyes, id participate in baiting them too.
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/16/2013
great story! short and simple
| i'll-be-waiting chapter 13 . 8/21/2013
This was really well written. I have to say I was a bit unsure about this story at the beginning, but then I found I couldn't stop until I had finished it. It was really beautiful.
| Casyn chapter 11 . 8/4/2013
I think you meant Earth for the silver pentacle, instead of Air. Silver is more of an Earth element and you had a wand of crystal for Air as well. Either way, the ritual was very well written. I have only taken part of two group rituals and both were at the outer edges of the circle. I absolutely love this story. It is definitely one of the best Master Harry story's I've ever read.
| natsuki23 chapter 13 . 7/25/2013
| Smelly-Little-Slytherin chapter 13 . 6/20/2013
Hey! I really liked this story, finished it on under an hour xD. It was written nicely and I like how you let it flow in a way. But, there were a lot of mistakes.
You spelled Gryffindor wrong at one point and there were a few spelling errors. Also, I really wanted to know what happened with Ron but no matter, this was a lovely ending:)
| nieka1995901 chapter 13 . 6/20/2013
Veey nice story!
| DolbyDigital chapter 13 . 5/28/2013
I loved this fic! and I really enjoyed reading it. I liked how they all got what they wanted in the end - except for Ron, obviously, - and that they were all happy. However, I do think that maybe the ending was a little too perfect? I would have thought there would still have been a few problems, but it's kind of like the epilogue in Deathly Hallows and I did really like it.
| DolbyDigital chapter 12 . 5/28/2013
I love Mende; I don't normally like OC's, but he was just awesome! I love this story, I really don't want it to end.
| DolbyDigital chapter 11 . 5/28/2013
They finally bonded! I hope Lucius gets rescued soon, I'd really like to know more about him.
| DolbyDigital chapter 10 . 5/28/2013
I really hope that Harry manages to free Lucius, and I can't wait until Harry and Draco bond!
| DolbyDigital chapter 9 . 5/27/2013
I completely agree with Harry about hating going to jewellery stores - I had to buy a new chain a couple months back; it was terrifying!