Reviews for Love
Loveless150050 chapter 2 . 12/28/2015
Make longer chapters please!
EveJHoang chapter 8 . 8/26/2015
You forgot the time zones between Texas and Hawaii XD other than that, lovely, as is your whole story
nk chapter 9 . 7/24/2015
thanks
bluebird397 chapter 7 . 7/20/2015
Twins! 'Cause twins are awesome! (I don't mean that in a perverted way) Example: Fred & George, Elladan & Elrohir, Hikaru & Kaoru
breannapierson1990 chapter 6 . 10/26/2014
Draco please? make eric and Draco get together please?! That would be funny! I can just imagine how both harry and draco would react to such a pairing not to mention the looks on their faces when they realize they have to deal with each other and try to get along for their mate's sake! am i evil or what? Oh and I really like this story it is getting really good (at first I thought it was a little slow now I am glad I stuck with it) keep up the great work! ;)
emthereble chapter 9 . 9/1/2014
wow the plot is BRILLIANT !
Sar'Kalu chapter 3 . 6/26/2013
Okay, this is a cool idea, but really poorly written, you need to take more care and it feels as though half the story is missing. Also, your spelling and grammar is atrocious and frankly, you need a beta reader. Otherwise, the potential of this story is brilliant.
RiceBallCrossIdolSnape chapter 3 . 4/26/2013
don't get too comfortable Potty! trouble is looking at you through the window... muhuhahhahahhah
RiceBallCrossIdolSnape chapter 2 . 4/26/2013
no trouble Potty? really? nahh dude trouble is obsessed with you didn't you know that by now? tut tut
RiceBallCrossIdolSnape chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
this sounds very good so far and i am looking forward to pressing that next button. there is one thing though, you have a couple mistakes such as "close clothes" that the Dursleys made him wear..
Karin Potter chapter 9 . 7/19/2012
hi it was cool to read
DemeRain chapter 9 . 6/15/2012
Thanks for sharing.
Cha The Emerald Panther chapter 3 . 9/29/2011
you know now that I think about it wouldn Eric and the other vampires be the ones needing Harry's permission to live there cuz they have lived there for 2 yrs and he's lived there for 10...? just wondering...
FictionFail chapter 6 . 6/8/2011
the idea of this story, is wonderful. However, it took 6 chapters to introduce the main plot point. And it read essentially as a summary of a more detailed story the whole way though. It lacked emotion and character depth, and detail. I can see this being used as an outline for a more detailed, final draft, but it reads not so well on it's own. It's a good starting point though, should you ever want to come back to it with improvements.
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 8 . 4/23/2011
I like it! **
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