Reviews for The Ribbon
Ava Sinclair chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
I am not the best person to review poetry but I really liked this one. You definitely dug deep into the symbolism of the Eclipse cover and brought out some complex meaning. It really speaks to the damage people do to each other in the name of love, and how, in reality, this would have ended so painfully for all involved. Someone would have lost.

Favorite Lines:

Anxiously they grasped, unable to share, unable to wholly win

It was only a matter of time.