Reviews for The Bring Me Game: In Pursuit of Happyness
xXPrincess-of-DarknessxXx chapter 3 . 5/7/2013
I love your Story its just beautiful ! So amazing :) your a talented writer i Must say :)
WhichBennett chapter 2 . 7/9/2011
Ahhh! More pregnant birds lol. I loved it!

I love the Bamon spy dove
WhichBennett chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
"so make that a pregnant bird number two" I laughed for the remainder of the chapter after that.

Great chapter as always :)
arshi chapter 3 . 4/14/2011
loved it!
aprilf00l chapter 3 . 3/10/2011
Loving your bamon stories, love the humor!
EmpireX chapter 3 . 2/1/2011
"Will that shut your piehole?" that seriously made me cackle. After watching The Descent last week and watching Elena hassle Damon about sharing his feelings, I found myself shouting at the TV: "oh my god shut the fuck up and let him grieve in private!" Elena can be annoying like that. Or maybe it's just Nina Dobrev's delivery? Anyhoo, this was a fun read. On to the next one!
DiorNicole chapter 3 . 8/11/2010
Great Ending To A Wonderful Story!

The Bring Me Game: In Pursuit of Happyness Chapter 3

1.) That’s not a surprise. Elena having a meltdown over something that’s not hers.

Apparently, her best friend was going to have a melt down.

2.) Elena’s description of friendship is totally off.

3.) I can’t even find words for this twisted crap.

If there was one thing she knew about Damon, it was that he was fixated on all things Katherine (which implied –not to brag, that Elena should be in the scene, one way or another).

4.) I’m also glad that Stefan found peace too.

5.) This was the cutes thing ever. Love that you name the dove ‘Bamon’!

Bamon wherever the little rascal is (honestly, he was starting to consider the dove like his very own offspring with Bonnie)

Keep Up The Great Work! Happy Writing!

DiorNicole
DiorNicole chapter 2 . 8/11/2010
Great Follow-Up Chapter!

The Bring Me Game: In Pursuit of Happyness Chapter 2

1.) Who died and made Elena Queen of all things.

Argh, so frustrated. Can't believe Damon still tries with me. I guess I shut him up this time though. Guy can't get a clue.

To be interrupted in the middle of her practicing just to read that certain text from Elena was quite frustrating, honestly.

2.) This line just made me smile. It’s one of the many reason I didn’t like Bella’s character and Elena. For some reason Elena thinks the sun rises and sets with her. Not!

But sometimes, when Elena was like this, all mopey-whiny about having Damon chase after her was such a bother, gave Bonnie the idea that she was almost implying that she was so irresistible like Bella Swan.

3.) No it’s not Dark Bonnie, it’s you. Even the nice guy gets tired of being walked on from time to time.

Sure Damon 'still tries' with you, but I'm fucking him. Will that shut your piehole? Get a clue, will ya? But that mentality was uncharacteristically too scary for her liking that she blames her witch blood for having such nasty thoughts. Dark Bonnie, she likes to call it.

4.) This should have been the first sign that she was totally falling for Damon.

If he can turn crow, Bonnie had just recently learned a way to control the spirit animal of the dove. Bamon, a pure white dove, was her very own personal 'magic helper'. Bamon's job was simple. Check on Damon once in a while.

5.) Now this should have been her first sign she was falling in love with Damon. Letting him feed from her. That’s love.

She didn't really invade his privacy, she didn't do what he did just yet, but when she wanted to be sure about something –like the time when she asked him to promise her not to feed on anyone else but her or the blood packs c/o Stefan, that's when Bamon was on duty.

6.) I rolled my eyes right along with Bonnie.

Again, with the confusion, Bonnie mentally thought with a roll of eyes.

7.) This would have been funny to read.

Damon was not really going to leave. He was actually going to her backyard to go crow and then annoy her with all the cawing he could do till she finally gave in.

8.) This is why we love Damon so much.

As they got in his car, Damon wondered if this was really the only first season to have doves around town. He must warn Stefan to stay away from the white-winged spy. Bonnie might get mad if Bamon would end up as a midnight snack.

Keep Up The Great Work! Happy Writing!

DiorNicole
DiorNicole chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I can’t believe I just recently found your wonderful Bamon stories. I’m late to the game; but I do plan on playing catch up with your stories.

The Bring Me Game: In Pursuit of Happyness Chapter 1

1.) I laughed out loud when I read this. I’m glad Damon has a clue about ol’ girl.

And he swore, at that exact moment, that though Elena was 'deep' and 'beautiful' and 'all things nice (unKatherine-like to be exact)', she, too fell into the 'stupidest people I've met category'.

2.) This train of thought is so Damon in every way possible.

Honestly, he only flirted with her because it got a rise out of Stefan. But he wouldn't tell anyone that. Ever.

3.) There’s way more Katherine in Elena than people want to admit.

4.) Damon always has the best reasoning for the things he does. But I must say this was about one of the best I’ve ever read. He’s actually plotting for something good and going about it in a almost civilized way.

Actually, he'd be hitting, like, five birds: One, winning Elena's childish dare. Two, put Bonnie's mind at ease about his loyalty (and hopefully, this will win him that invitation to her home –so make that a pregnant bird number two). Three, just show Elena in her face that he wasn't really head over heels for her; screw the acting because… four, Bonnie will give him a repeat of last night, knowing he'll get a prize for doing previous tasks and who was he to deny her who she wants (yes, he was an easy lay for her)? And lastly, five, be a good brother and put Stefan at ease because of reason number three. PERFECT. "So… let's go?"

5.) Maybe not the best way of getting what you want Damon.

"Uhh, reality check, Damon. We are not together!"

"But, Bonnie," Damon pouted at her. "You gave me your virginity."

Hence, the smell of wood. Damon rubbed a hand over his face. Damn door should be terrorized once he gets himself an invite. Just you wait…

Keep Up The Great Work! Happy Writing!

DiorNicole
Hellzz-on-Earth chapter 3 . 7/26/2010
I love it when BAmon play games lol.

Thanks for sharing. Hope to read more from you?

Happy writing
Niphuria chapter 3 . 7/7/2010
Life is beautiful, and this story is beautiful! Loved every bit! Again, I don't know these people either (gods, I must be SO old!) but it was pretty easy for me to follow. You kept it contained to only a few characters, I quickly got the idea of who and what they were, and you tied it all together seamlessly.

If you can make a "know-nothing" (in the sense of not being at all familiar with the genre) understand and enjoy, that's a great talent.

I particularly like Dark Bonnie and vain and "dumb as a rock" Damon! LOL
LadyEpic27 chapter 3 . 7/4/2010
beautiful ending :)

i enjoyed the trilogy of chapters- reading each just made my day :).

Bamon forever! and I truly thank you for putting up this story- now i know this isn't for me, or the other readers- it is for the author, and the author alone. but i appreciated every great detail that you wrote down. amazing.

thank you again.

-LadyEpic27

:)
Rogue Assasin chapter 3 . 7/2/2010
Update soon please - really am enjoying it
Miss Gypsy Willow chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
Aw this was so cute and funny and just down right awesome!

Loved every min of it! Great work!

XD
Vie chapter 3 . 6/30/2010
I loved it! More stories from you please! :)
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